Pimp My Trailer

[Famous]

Just uploaded a Channel Trailer, and while I enjoy it, I might also be a bit biased. So I thought I'd post it up and see what critiquing everyone can offer. From overall thoughts and impressions to what you'd change or what you'd keep, I'm interested in hearing your opinions.

 

[DeliciousCrackers]

Felt a tad bit too short, the end lacks shock value. I was waiting for something funny to happen, and i get is a subscribe button. A bit disappointing to be honest. You should give people a bit more shock value stuff.
Hope that helped!
Best of luck!

 

[Famous]

You should give people a bit more shock value

Insert clip of me mooning the camera... Check!

Have to look at the possibility of beefing up the ending. Was going for a cliffhanger feel but, if it feels disappointing then I may have missed the mark.

Thanks for your feedback!

If anyone else has any suggestions or opinions feel free to let me know!