Overall review would be much appreciated

Luyt TV

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Hi all
So this is a new channel and before i go any further i would like a review on latest couple videos in terms of editing and thumbnails and whatever, if you have something to say i would like to know so i can improve now as we grow.
 
some nice shots, I skimed part 1. I would say you should expand upon the destination of your holiday, why you enjoyed it and what made it so special?

Otherwise right now, I see it as a pro shot "look how lush and amazing my holiday was" - and that's a bad first impression.
 
some nice shots, I skimed part 1. I would say you should expand upon the destination of your holiday, why you enjoyed it and what made it so special?

Otherwise right now, I see it as a pro shot "look how lush and amazing my holiday was" - and that's a bad first impression.

Thanks a ton, i'll take that into consideration for next time.
 
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