OVER 200 SUBS(REVIEW MY CHANNEL)

[Suckerpunch5412]

please list the things that i do good and the stuff i do bad. im doing gaming videos soon with my cousin and my other youtube freinds that have over 1k subs.

(Alot of people say that i should really start commentating,what do you think)

 

[XXLRay]

- Your channel art looks in principle nice but is totally misplaced as lots of text is cut off. So I am not sure whether it contains information about your channel content and upload schedule.
- Your logo lloks nice for itself but it does not match the banner design.
- The design of your custom thumbnails should match the rest of your branding. The goal is to make somebody who sees one of your thumbnails remember your channel.
- The music of your channel trailer is catchy but you shouldn't change aspect rations within a video and it would be nice to include some demo footage. Furthermore you could giving it a bit more personality by doing a voice over. Finally make it your official channel trailer that automatically plays for new visitors.
- Your about section is okay but could contain some more keywords.
- Also your videos could profit from a proper voice over.
- Speed up or cut boring sections like loading screens and entering text.
- Make your video description longer by entering more meaningful sentences that contain keywords.
- If you want to return the favor name one thing you would improve on my channel

 

[Suckerpunch5412]

thanks for the review, i personaly think your videos are awesome in every single way.You should probably be more funny and energetic and put better tags on your videos(keywords that people search for) it really helps alot. I tought my older cousin how to tag proprly and he got 90ish subs in 3 weeks.I also thought that you should keep your viewers entertained in the video because the title imediatley attracted me to watch the how to make a bow video. PS I subbed to you