Outro screen review

[Kath]

Soo......how old are you? Where are from? What are you doing? How are you?

 

[SamaJaffa]

Soo......how old are you? Where are from? What are you doing? How are you?

16
England
Spending my time on this rubbish forum called YTtalk JK JK PLZ DON'T KILL ME!!!!
I'm, how my friend Tony the Tiger likes to put it, GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!
What about you?

 

[Kath]

16
England
Spending my time on this rubbish forum called YTtalk JK JK PLZ DON'T KILL ME!!!!
I'm, how my friend Tony the Tiger likes to put it, GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!
What about you?

29
Canada
Me too! But I still keel you nao.
Omg, Tony is awesome!

 

[SamaJaffa]

29
Canada
Me too! But I still keel you nao.
Omg, Tony is awesome!

Y U KEEL MEEEEEEEE??????? DON'T DO IT PLZ! And yes, Tony is awesome! He's my best friend! Ok maybe he's not.......... ( ._.)

 

[Kath]

Y U KEEL MEEEEEEEE??????? DON'T DO IT PLZ! And yes, Tony is awesome! He's my best friend! Ok maybe he's not.......... ( ._.)

He can't be your best friend if he's already mine. No sharesies. (Yes, I really am 29 year old) bahaha

 

[SamaJaffa]

He can't be your best friend if he's already mine. No sharesies. (Yes, I really am 29 year old) bahaha

Well then if he's your best friend, then this IS MINE! well you know what they say about being 29? Because I don't... :/

 

[Kath]

Well then if he's your best friend, then this IS MINE! well you know what they say about being 29? Because I don't... :/

My face! My beautiful face

 

[SamaJaffa]

My face! My beautiful face

NO! IT'S MINEEEEEEEE! MUAHAHAHAHAHAAHA

 

[TheNM22]

I took the black portion of the text off and kept it orange. Does it look better?
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That looks better, without a doubt Now, it looks awesome Easy to read and a great contrast between the colors

 

[ItsChomp]

Looks Good it has all the basic things that are needed on a outro