onechannel complete! rate trailer!

[ghostlyrich]

hey guys i finally got the new trailer done tell me what you think of my onechannel i need to no were to improve

 

[KGATV]

I thought it was good


Reminds me that I still need to make mine hahaha.

 

[Callum Handley]

hey guys i finally got the new trailer done tell me what you think of my onechannel i need to no were to improve

i think you spelt trailer wrong in the title of it other than that its great it explains you perfectly

 

[Tyggs]

Great. Got me subbed!

 

[dylanmanincfanatic]

Pretty good, little repetitive. You seem a little nervous too, gee I can't imagine why presenting yourself to the whole world like that. Overall it was pretty good, I think you could do a little better, but it may have taken you awhile to come up with that.

If you do re-shoot, relax remember to breathe. You might consider a short-bangy script to, so you stay on point. I'd say it's an informative clip as to what to expect on your channel, so mission accomplished there my friend.

Best of luck with this project and all your endeavors.

~Dylan

 

[ghostlyrich]

i think you spelt trailer wrong in the title of it other than that its great it explains you perfectly

fixing now haha

Great. Got me subbed!

sweet thanks

 

[Callum Handley]

fixing now haha
sweet thanks

sorry if I sounded like a grammar nazi just thought you should know ^^

 

[ghostlyrich]

Pretty good, little repetitive. You seem a little nervous too, gee I can't imagine why presenting yourself to the whole world like that. Overall it was pretty good, I think you could do a little better, but it may have taken you awhile to come up with that.

If you do re-shoot, relax remember to breathe. You might consider a short-bangy script to, so you stay on point. I'd say it's an informative clip as to what to expect on your channel, so mission accomplished there my friend.

Best of luck with this project and all your endeavors.

~Dylan

thanks for the in depth critique. I was nervious cause guy was staring at me well smoking weed thats why i looked over you guys almost got a fight video out of this haha

 

[ghostlyrich]

sorry if I sounded like a grammar nazi just thought you should know ^^

lmao! not at all man it's either you tell me or i get trolled buy alot of grammer nazi 13 year olds

 

[Callum Handley]

lmao! not at all man it's either you tell me or i get trolled buy alot of grammer nazi 13 year olds

that's what i thought i hate those guys :L