Newest APB Montage! Feedback wanted :)

[Matt Edwards]

So I've worked a bit harder on this montage (Ironically it's probably the worst), there was a rendering issue near the start.

Here it is, please tell me why it's not very good, unless you think it is good haha. I don't know why, as much as I worked harder it seems I worked much less hard and I don't really like it all that much.

Thanks everyone!
Matt