New Youtuber Asking for Constructive Criticism

[ItzJSasa]

Hey guys, I've been looking to start up a youtube channel since 2012, coudlnt decide whether I should pursue Gaming, Music, VLoggingg, etc. Finally I uploaded my first video yesterday and I would appreciate some constructive criticism to help better my videos and channel.

"Art is not what you see, but what others make you see" - Edgar Degas

 

[Valerik]

Hey ItzJSasa,

Unfortunately you link is not working, so it is not possible to check the channel.

 

[ItzJSasa]

Oh thank you for that! I'll post a link to my channel @Valerik

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCrlhVlCL4WywLabPfvNle-w[DOUBLEPOST=1479098546,1479098112][/DOUBLEPOST]@Valerik Okay I the link should be fixed

 

[Valerik]

Hey ItzJSasa,

You have a very cool way of making tutorials which I think is actually very interesting and appealing, however I do think you can work a bit on the tone of your voice or at least the volume/gain. Make sure work on improving the quality of the audio you also deal make sure to remove the noise. There really is not much noise in your commentary, it just sounds a bit low quality. The way you give tips though is very cool and keep at it.

 

[ItzJSasa]

@Valerik Thanks for the imput! I'll definitely work on them.[DOUBLEPOST=1479099170,1479099154][/DOUBLEPOST]Input*