Hello!
First of all, for a first video this is not bad at all. The lighting is actually pretty good but if you did want to get some lighting we got 2 x Continuous Lighting Kit 50x70cm Softbox for about £60 (not sure in dollars sorry) off Amazon- these are pretty great if you have room to set them up!
On to your video, you have a very comfortable talking style in front of the camera which is great, your audio is good too thanks to the clip on mic.
You could maybe use more pictures or trailer clips in the top corner as something to make it a bit more visually entertaining.
Your review is a well done too, although I think you should have tagged it for spoilers as you give away some pretty big plot points and if somebody is using your video to see whether or not they want to watch it, they might not be happy.
Also, I think when you got to about the 4.30 minute mark you had basically finished reviewing the film and maybe should have just finished the video there- I did find my concentration level starting to waver a bit there- knowing when to cut a video I think comes more with time so I'm sure you will find a better balance in the future.
If you wanted to do a more indepth discussion of the franchise and the film involving plots points- maybe label it differently to a "review" like an analysis or something?
Anyway- it's great to see another film review on YTTalk, there doesn't seem to be many of us! If you had the time, we'd really appreciate if you could give us some feedback on our latest review video:
http://yttalk.com/threads/a-3-min-r...-one-punch-man-please-feedback-needed.209297/