Need Your feedbacks

[wassim]

Hello everyone
Im starting new youtube channel and im making multipurpose videos and i would like to have some feedbacks about some improvements about videos or content or anything that can help me
this is a video that i have made

and this is my channel link if you want to check other videos
channel link

 

[mirrorlessNY(youtuber)]

Hi, congrats on 1st post. Video is cool. Here are a few forum tips:
Make it easy to find your channel, put a link under name(age) as seen under mine to the LEFT of this msg - read my signature on HOW TO below this msg
Also have a look at forum rules https://yttalk.com/threads/yttalk-rules-quick-and-easy-to-read.127266/