NEED some FEEDback

[Solid Seven]

May I request a review of the following on my channel:
-The graphics(profile pic. and banner)
-My first commentary(Specifically what you thought of my voice tone, things like that)
Thanks

 

[xXFlyingSheepXx]

Okay i watched your video and i have a couple things to say.
Logo - I think your logo is a little bit irrelevant because you don't do minecraft videos and it could lead people to think you do. But it is a great logo
Banner - Again the same thing but it still has a good design.
Commentary - Your commentary was very good. At the beginning you were very confident and did not stutter that much but as the video went on you kind of stuttered a bit. Try to avoid things like uhh/umm/hmmm E.T.C. The commentary was straight to the point and you mainly stuck to the video which is a good thing. I wish you all the best

 

[19ConCon]

Profile pic doesn't match the banner in terms of colour scheme, if the lines in your profile pic were yellow it would go perfectly.

But yeah unless you start making minecraft videos, it'd be a little weird having that channel art.

The commentary was good and interesting, you're easy to listen to and you sound cool.

 

[WheelsToHell]

The Logo didn't relate to your video, so you might want to change it to something related to your channel.

The Commentary : You were confident and straight to the point, sure you stuttered a little bit but after a few videos I am sure will get the hang of it!