Need advice on How To Improve Please!

[ThePrimeXD]

I'm just starting up my new gaming channel called TheTurnaboutHalifaxComplex and I'm wondering if anybody could give me feedback on what they liked and what they hated. Any criticism is welcome and it will help me improve. Thank you for reading!

http://m.youtube.com/channel/UCS4qqNNzi3yTbkg3MA1ekOw