My Very Very First YouTube Video: I need your thoughts!

piaiscool

piaiscool

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Hello there folks!
I've only created my channel 3 or 4 days ago, and I know my first video isn't going to be perfect.
I've checked a lot of you guys' channels and most of you folks are already experienced with videos.
I hope to follow your footsteps by giving me feedback! :)

 
I'll definitely take a look when I get home. I am doing a channel based on reviewing other Youtubers and talking about their channels.
 
I am a guy and I know nothing about make up lol, but are you go for showing how to do put it on properly, cause damn you know stuff or you going more for a real world kind of comedy kind of thing? If it is the second I think you should play off someone video or just use your own audio in the back ground while doing the comedy part. Cause it was a little confusing in that respect. But honestly it was very well done video,the opening the camera work good job for your first vid.
 
IronAntz said:
I am a guy and I know nothing about make up lol, but are you go for showing how to do put it on properly, cause damn you know stuff or you going more for a real world kind of comedy kind of thing? If it is the second I think you should play off someone video or just use your own audio in the back ground while doing the comedy part. Cause it was a little confusing in that respect. But honestly it was very well done video,the opening the camera work good job for your first vid.
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I was focusing more on comedy on this one. The whole concept of it was sort of like an 'expectation vs reality' video. Thank you for checking the video out for me! I'll take note of what you said. This helps a lot. :)
 
I would maybe add a pause with like captions to add the dramatization on the expectation vs reality, the humor was good especially as your first video. The more you do it, the more natural the jokes will come, so will the quality, and as an advice i give to myself, the lol must come within and not forced so it can be authentic.

ps. i have no idea about make up but you seem to know your stuff, so that's already something going for you, keep it up! :)
 
Onestephigher said:
I would maybe add a pause with like captions to add the dramatization on the expectation vs reality, the humor was good especially as your first video. The more you do it, the more natural the jokes will come, so will the quality, and as an advice i give to myself, the lol must come within and not forced so it can be authentic.

ps. i have no idea about make up but you seem to know your stuff, so that's already something going for you, keep it up! :)
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Oh wow, you're completely right! That pause would've made it better. I'll keep that in mind next time.
And yeah, I guess it just takes me time to get used to being funny in front of an audience. I'm sure that time will come :D
Thank you so much for your feedback, I appreciate it! I'll check yours out also. :)
 
I like the comedy added to the make up video tbh. A lot of make up people on Youtube seem dull but you have a personality which is really cool
 
"Damn now I look extra chinky" haha that made laugh. Nice video, maybe you could film it in daylight next time? Natural light always beats indoor lighting just because indoors it always gives a bit of a yellow tinge and can be dark, causing grain on the video. Besides that I think it was a very well put together first video! :)
 
I watched your video an hour ago and it's really a cool concept. I like it, plus the views on it and the likes the video itself got is really nice as well.

Just touch up your audio a bit and the quality and I think you might have something cool.
 
Honestly this is so much better then I was expecting. This is a awesome video! I love the comedy mixed in with the actual tutorial it mixes very well! Very high quality editing done looks great! It does sound like your clipping sometimes though, so perhaps check that?
 
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