My First "Short Film"

CainDamon

CainDamon

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So this past week I was fortunate to go to Florida with my family and my best friend it was an amazing experience and I learned a valuable life lesson while down there I hope you guys enjoyed this little video. my goal was to make it in under 12 hours so I wrote, edited, and uploaded this whole video to push myself. I would like any form of feedback just so I can grow at making film. Thank You for your time!
 
This is amazing! I like your voiceover on the video clips :)
Video resolution is 720p, thats pretty cool :)
I like your editing!
Audio quality is awesome :)
All the best buddy :D
 
I really enjoyed that actually, it makes me want to watch more of them!

I guess the only nitpicky criticism I can think of is I really didn't like the portrait mobile footage because of that weird effect around it, but honestly it didn't ruin the video and I still watched it. Well done!
 
JordanBlower said:
I really enjoyed that actually, it makes me want to watch more of them!

I guess the only nitpicky criticism I can think of is I really didn't like the portrait mobile footage because of that weird effect around it, but honestly it didn't ruin the video and I still watched it. Well done!
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yeah i didnt like it either and it was a snapchat video but i only used them because they followed the story I doubt i will ever use snapchat footage again haha but thank you for your feedback!
 
Great channel man, really liked the commentary. Keep it up! I think the banner needs working on and just the text in some of the older videos, quite difficult to read. Other than that, spot on stuff!
 
Leech said:
Great channel man, really liked the commentary. Keep it up! I think the banner needs working on and just the text in some of the older videos, quite difficult to read. Other than that, spot on stuff!
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Thanks man I will get working on a new banner and not make anymore thumbnails like the old ones :)
 
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