My FIRST real skit...

Mikeyy

Mikeyy

asian persuasion
Hey everyone, so I have been on a really big break from making videos because of college, but I am starting to get back into it. My cousin and I made our first real skit and I would love some feedback.

Note: Some of the scenes I had the wrong setting for my mic so you could hear some background noise.

Side Note Note: My cousin is an amateur at camera work, so some parts with me may be out of focus, i know :(.

But anyways! Thank you for your time! :D
 
stopitnelle said:
Nice vid! :) In the future, use a tripod for certain scenes so that the result looks more professional. Remember that lighting is quite important as well. Overwall, it was quite a funny video. Keep it up!
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Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it! Yeah the lighting is also something that bugged me because I wasn't home so I had none of my lighting equipment. But yeah I am glad you liked it, thanks again!
 
That was really good for your first skit, I thought it was pretty funny. The camera work wasn't that bad but you could get a tripod if you're worried about it looking shaky. Also as a suggestion, I think it would be a good idea for this video to describe each "gamer" in all the different scenes with a title. For example, in the first scene where hes raging, cussing, and throwing tissues, you could add words some where on the screen that that appear saying "the rage gamer" then fade off after the skit starts.

*the know it all* "asks you to play then blames you for losing"
*the hermit* "turns on light then proceed's to act like they're dying"

This is not only funny, but it gives non gamer's a good idea of what is suppose to happening in the video. Also, love the random banana peel, really made me laugh. :)
 
EmberChann said:
That was really good for your first skit, I thought it was pretty funny. The camera work wasn't that bad but you could get a tripod if you're worried about it looking shaky. Also as a suggestion, I think it would be a good idea for this video to describe each "gamer" in all the different scenes with a title. For example, in the first scene where hes raging, cussing, and throwing tissues, you could add words some where on the screen that that appear saying "the rage gamer" then fade off after the skit starts.

*the know it all* "asks you to play then blames you for losing"
*the hermit* "turns on light then proceed's to act like they're dying"

This is not only funny, but it gives non gamer's a good idea of what is suppose to happening in the video. Also, love the random banana peel, really made me laugh. :)
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Wow I am so glad that you thought the video was good :) And yeah I was thinking about adding the title of each gamer in my video, but the video was generally suppose to show how it is to live with a gamer. If the video was about different types of gamers, then I definitely would have put a title for each gamer :)

I am really glad that you thought the video was funny, especially the random banana peel haha. Thank you for taking your time to watch my video!
 
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