My First "IRL" Comedic Review...How'd I Do?

This was Amazing. You did everything on spot theirs only a couple things I would change.

1.Meh? Give us a reason why they were meh doesnt need to be a long review about the game just a sentence maybe the story was bad or it just didnt captivate you like it should of had.

2.Acting This one is just natural everyone grows better with practice.

You've earned your self a subscriber keep it up I can see you being really big later on. Such quality
Yeah, I definitely see now that "meh" is not adequate for an opinion on about a game (or 2 in my case xD).

And for the acting thing, I definitely haven't done too much live acting in my lifetime, so I'd imagine/hope that's something I can improve. I've done plenty of voice acting and love it, but it's different. lol (In voice-acting I don't need to be conscious about where my eyes are looking, for example.)

But, thank you so much (Especially for subscribing).:yay: I love what I'm doing, and I don't plan on stopping anytime soon. :x3:[DOUBLEPOST=1413954508,1413954363][/DOUBLEPOST]
Yeah, autofocus can be a b***h that way, but that's just something I'll have to pay more mind to next time. :hehecute:[DOUBLEPOST=1413954750][/DOUBLEPOST]
Now that I think of it, if you keep doing reviews like that we should do kind of similar content. I hope I will make some kind of collaboration with you someday, maybe when my sub count increases..
I definitely plan on doing comedic reviews, but I still feel I haven't quite honed on the style I like doing the best (or my niche). You'd think with this channel being over a year old I'd know by now. lol

But, that's something I'd definitely consider. If we could get a solid idea going, it could be a lot of fun. :x3:
 
But, that's something I'd definitely consider. If we could get a solid idea going, it could be a lot of fun. :x3:
A couple if ideas I had in mind were either a certain amount of reviewers talking about the same game for "style comparison" or taking a serie with multiple installments (like Driver, Ratchet and Clank or stuff like that) and having one reviewer talking about one title the next about the sequel etc, and then referring to each other.

EDIT: Another idea might be a "review pong", where every reviewer tells the other (or next in the sequence) what to review
 
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A couple if ideas I had in mind were either a certain amount of reviewers talking about the same game for "style comparison" or taking a serie with multiple installments (like Driver, Ratchet and Clank or stuff like that) and having one reviewer talking about one title the next about the sequel etc, and then referring to each other.

EDIT: Another idea might be a "review pong", where every reviewer tells the other (or next in the sequence) what to review
Hey, add me on Skype, "StormChameleon" and we can talk about it. :happy:
 
I think your acting could use some work, but of course that's something that comes with practicing. Also, try not to take inspiration from just Jontron and AVGN, they've more or less perfected their format and the only way to be truly original is to take inspiration from so many different sources, that you become a combination that hasn't been done before. Other than that your editing skills are GREAT and there is definitely potential :)
 
I think your acting could use some work, but of course that's something that comes with practicing. Also, try not to take inspiration from just Jontron and AVGN, they've more or less perfected their format and the only way to be truly original is to take inspiration from so many different sources, that you become a combination that hasn't been done before. Other than that your editing skills are GREAT and there is definitely potential :)
Thanks for the feedback! :yay:

I definitely plan on improving my acting; as I've said before "IRL" acting is pretty new to me. I've done plenty of voice-acting, but not so much in front of the camera kind of stuff, so it's something I'm going to work on. I also plan on getting more original; this video was purely experimental, and I have lots of ideas for future videos that'll hopefully help me develop my own style. :hehecute:

And I'm glad you noticed the editing. :smileysmile: That's something I try to work on and get better at with every upload. :x3:
 
Thanks for the feedback! :yay:

I definitely plan on improving my acting; as I've said before "IRL" acting is pretty new to me. I've done plenty of voice-acting, but not so much in front of the camera kind of stuff, so it's something I'm going to work on. I also plan on getting more original; this video was purely experimental, and I have lots of ideas for future videos that'll hopefully help me develop my own style. :hehecute:

And I'm glad you noticed the editing. :smileysmile: That's something I try to work on and get better at with every upload. :x3:
That's great! Experimenting with new skills is the quickest way to get better, and honestly it was a really REALLY great effort considering a lot of it was a first for you. It'll be cool to see you improve from here!
 
That's great! Experimenting with new skills is the quickest way to get better, and honestly it was a really REALLY great effort considering a lot of it was a first for you. It'll be cool to see you improve from here!
Thanks a lot! :x3blush:

I'm excited, also; I can't wait for the day for when I can look back at the videos I'm making now and be like, "Jeez, I made this crap? What the hell was I thinking?!"

*Salutes* I shall do my best!
 
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