MY FIRST EVER SKIT.... A CRITIQUE ME OR REVIEW ME ...or whatever THANK YOU!!!

Ryan Freakin Virtudes

Ryan Freakin Virtudes

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hi ladies and gents what up!!! the link above is my first ever skit or attempt to be funny whilst at the same time promoting my channel. i would be very grateful to receive any form of criticisms whether good or bad or just meh. i shall leave the reviewing to you ladies and gents and hopefully get some rad feedback. thank you x] Ciao!!
 
It was okay for a first skit. Personally i would of added a little background music to make it more interesting and maybe more expressions and more acting but like you said it was your first attempt at a skit so keep it up man, practice will only make you better,
 
Were...were you talking to yourself? or was your imagination so powerful that it took physical form? Holy ****, I think a bit of BGM would of been nice, and yeah it was kinda emotionless (I'm pretty emotionless, I know). A bit long for me and needs just a few touchups, but it was pretty nice.
 
Nthao said:
Were...were you talking to yourself? or was your imagination so powerful that it took physical form? Holy ****, I think a bit of BGM would of been nice, and yeah it was kinda emotionless (I'm pretty emotionless, I know). A bit long for me and needs just a few touchups, but it was pretty nice.
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yes i was talking to myself. i couldn't do it with anyone else :P (that's what she said)
lol only if i had such power x]....background music hmmmm i'll keep that in mind i was actually thinking of adding BGM i was just not so sure about it. Emotionless lol i somewhat agree since i have that monotoned voice, i'll keep that more in mind. was it a bit long? whats the suggested time for such skits? yaaaay it's prettty nice....thanks for the feedback sir x][DOUBLEPOST=1374798279,1374798185][/DOUBLEPOST]
Sickflowz TV said:
It was okay for a first skit. Personally i would of added a little background music to make it more interesting and maybe more expressions and more acting but like you said it was your first attempt at a skit so keep it up man, practice will only make you better,
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Was it now? Yaaaaayyyy Ok is better than not OK x] and thanks x] yes i was thinking of adding background music i was just not sure of it and i really didnt think about it. more expressions and more acting? in what way exactly? but i'll keep that noted.
practice does make us better. practice makes AWESOME......thanks for the feedback sir
 
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