Minecraft Build Tutorial; Why am I seeing 0:19 AVG. Retention?

[Stuart Johnson]

I'd like some advice on this video I made. I see lots of other people talking about ~40% retention being good, but I'm seeing 4.3%. Unimpressed.

Some advice on what is uninteresting would be appreciated

 

[Nithlus]

Hi, your very much like me in that at the begining of the video you talk at a resonable volume but as the video goes on you begine to go more quiet and mumble to yourself. I'd say you need to work on keeping the same volume and tone of voice through your whole video and not just at the begining.