Mid series video review

[WillyPapafry]

So I am on my 21st video of Metro Last Light and I just want to make sure I am doing it right and have been generally entertaining, so I would like if someone would please review my 21st episode of Metro Last Light and give me feedback on anything I can improve please! I'll leave the link below.

Oh and Brutal honesty is best please

 

[Qazplm]

From what I can tell, there was nothing particularly wrong with the video, although there was nothing that made you really stand out from other people.

One thing I think you should try working on is trying to speak loud enough to hear throughout the whole video. There were quite a few parts where I couldn't hear you clearly.

This one is more just personal preference, but I think it might be funnier if you tried to talk more about the game's surroundings. If you notice anything that is in the slightest bit strange, try pointing it out and make fun of it.

 

[WillyPapafry]

I will make sure to do that! Thank you! Although there probably won't be a noticeable change until another four episodes in this series because I record in advance but thanks!