Looking for video feedback.

[Weebster]

Hey guys. I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on following things:

1| Can you understand what I am saying and if it is even remotely entertaining (I am not native English speaker and I do feel like my English is horrible)

2| My audio. Is it fine as it is , or should I tweak some settings in the Audacity ( I am using Blue Yeti)

3| Is the lightning on my face cam good , or should I change the settings in my cam recording software(like white balance) Some of my friends said it's bad.

I would love to if you didn't hold punches, If possible I would like a honest feedback without sugar coating ( I can take it)

And here is the video,it's part 4 ,but I don't think you need any context.

 

[MentallyGames]

1. In general you were understandable, but sometimes you try to talk fast, which is difficult to follow with your pronunciation. I think talking just a little bit slower might help you a lot. You are energetic and the fact that you have this English with a clear accent going on actually added to the entertainment value for me.
2. Audio: blue yeti power man (I use that mic as well). You make it work absolutely fine. Good balance between in game volume and mic volume as well.
3. Your lightning is not bad, but it makes you look pale. You can probably play around with it and make it look a bit ''warmer''.

Overall pretty good job dude! Keep it up.

 

[Weebster]

1. In general you were understandable, but sometimes you try to talk fast, which is difficult to follow with your pronunciation. I think talking just a little bit slower might help you a lot. You are energetic and the fact that you have this English with a clear accent going on actually added to the entertainment value for me.
2. Audio: blue yeti power man (I use that mic as well). You make it work absolutely fine. Good balance between in game volume and mic volume as well.
3. Your lightning is not bad, but it makes you look pale. You can probably play around with it and make it look a bit ''warmer''.

Overall pretty good job dude! Keep it up.

1. I have the same problem in my native language; even my friends said so... I'll try to talk slower though.
3. I'll try to tweak white balance, but I am generally pale in real life. ( Not going outside does that to your skin)
Thanks for your feedback, I am constantly trying to improve...Okay that's a lie... When I am not procrastinating I am trying to improve as much as I can.

 

[BakedGood$]

1. Actually, your English is pretty good, just try to talk a little bit slower to help. And yes, you're energetic enough to keep me entertained and watching.
2. Sound quality is really good man don't even worry about that at all!
3. Camera lighting is good but I would try to make it a bit warmer maybe bring out the oranges and yellows in post-production.

Keep it up man, you got some nice work!