Looking for unbiased feedback on a video

Lordwindowlicker

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I've found it very hard to get comments on any of my videos. And of course I always feel like friends and family are going to sugarcoat things. My main concerns right now are emoting a bit more, but I'd like to hear your thoughts.

 
It's a good video but you woulda lost me before you got to the good parts. 1:12 is when it gets good btw. I think overall the video is a bit long given my attention span, but I really have no advice on how to fix that since it is quality content.
 
I really appreciate the feedback. I am editing the last bit, because I forgot that I had said it in the first post.
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Hey there! Nice video man!

One small issue that I have is that when you are showing images or anything it has the black borders and background.

It would be nice if you added some sort of pizzas or maybe even just fill it to screen.

Other than that I loved the video!
 
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