Looking For Some Feedback On First Commentary!!

[Keystone]

Hey yttalk just wondering if you guys could take a look at my new video its the first one ive done with a commentary. Caught me my first ps3 black ops booster. Im sure i sound utterly horrible but i guess ya get better the more you do. If ya do enjoy it please give it a like and possible a sub or twitter retweet i appreciate it. Feedback here would be great aswell

 

[Tyler Rand]

Hey man!
Great content, great visuals, great audio. The only thing I'd suggest is a red bull haha. Don't be too ecstatic, but some pep in your voice might help you out
Just trying to help.
-Tyler

 

[Keystone]

Thanks man appreciate that I'll def try that on the next one