I did notice the ticking in the GTA video while editing, myself and one other friend got the noise, while the other did not; we think it was coming from his skype. But I did try fixing it a bit, cutting out the click when there was no dialogue. Thanks for feedback regardless, it really helps!
-Channel Banner & Icon
They are okay. They are both drawn well and they work well together, but the banner does seem a little bland. I'm not saying go crazy adding stuff, but a little bit more polish to your banner's background would really bring it that next level.
-Channel Layout
Seems fine. I'm not really sure how people could mess up a layout.
-Audio & Video Quality
The audio quality seems to be your weakest point. I watched your Channel Trailer and the OCTOVAN | GTA V video. Both had rough audio for different reasons. The Trailer had heavy room sound and the GTA V video had alot of audio clicking as you guys were conversing. The video quality is okay, but there is ghosting caused because you either capture or format to a 30 fps standard. Video games generally run at a much higher frame rate so that is why there is that issue.
-Commentary Quality
Your commentary is pretty good. Your GTA V video was a little too commentary heavy for my taste, but it wasn't bad. You guys played off of each-other well and it lead to me smirking a few times.
-My newest video (OCTOVAN | GTA V Funny Moments | w/ Friends)
Reviewed throughout.
I don't have much of a channel for you to review yet. I only have two short films, some trailers and some behind the scenes videos, but you're welcome to let me know what you think of my WiP. If you have some suggestions you can either post here or PM me. Whatever you are comfortable with.
After watching all the Mr Empty videos, I found a few positives and a few negatives.
Positives:
-Good story telling.
-Good visual effects.
-Interesting concepts (something original).
-Good acting (for the most part, there were a few stutters and bland lines).
-Profile icon is good.
Negatives:
-The video and audio quality are lacking a bit, which does't really affect the overall impact of the film, but is always good to improve if your budget can handle it.
-The intro and ending titles were a bit lackluster, basic font animation on a picture or a black screen. Try messing around in other programs or with different fonts and animations.
-Same can be said about the banner, the font brings down the quality of the banner, and maybe applying filters to the photos on the banner so that they match (a bit more), it would look a lot more appealing.
-A layout could be added, maybe sort all your trailers, films and BTS videos into separate playlists and include an intro video to reel people in when they see your channel page.
Overall your channel is really good for its size, keep working at it and I'm sure it'll grow quickly![DOUBLEPOST=1431306612,1431306555][/DOUBLEPOST]
First glance at your channel, Banner and avatar are nice and simple.
The Channel intro is original and great
-Audio & Video Quality
Your videos seem good, I mean you edit 'em not that much so you still got a raw feeling.
Also you're using good music, incompetech for the win
If you ask me the audio quality is alright, but not great. I mean I could listen to such a video without annoying myself to the audio.
-Commentary Quality
The commentary is fine too, you're talking enough, though your DarkRP videos seem kinda boring to me, your last video with GTA 5 was amusing, I liked it
Overall I'd say, the channel is good, might look into improving audio, nothing else
If you feel like it, you could review my channel, not alot of vids yet though.
Like the channel before it, I'm going to list off the positives and negatives from your Just Cause 2 video, I felt that if I watched your War Thunder videos; I would be a bit biased since I don't enjoy the game as much.
Positives:
- Video and audio quality are good.
- Icon, banner and watermarks are good.
- Good lighthearted humor.
Negatives:
- The split personality/contrasting characters seemed a bit forced at times, maybe try having other videos without the concept to bring in a more broad audience.
- Adding an intro or outro cards to your videos can make them look more professional and can remind people to subscribe.
- Try editing out some more bland parts of the gameplay to keep everything a bit more fast paced and keep the viewer interested.
- A layout could be added, maybe sort all your videos into separate playlists by games and include an intro video to get people to subscribe when they arrive on your channel page.
Overall, you're off to a great start! Everyone has some problems when they first start making their videos, but I'm sure you'll be able to improve everything and start growing faster!
