Let Me Know What You Think?

i liked it - it wasn't overlong, it was funny, and you didn't add any unnecessary content :))
 
I think you did well. It's funny, well-edited and clever. It also doesn't wear out it's welcome. If there's any constructive criticism I could give it would be to have a more unique and set background, perhaps one a little more colorful, or even just a solid white/color backdrop.

There's nothing necessarily wrong with the bedroom background, but the openness draws focus away from you and causes the eyes to wander a little bit. A more closed "set" would keep people more engaged with you and what you're saying.

Hope it helps, keep it up!
 
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