Just some feedback

Wizz

Wizz

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Hey YT Talk,

I am trying to change my style of commentary to be more exciting and appealing to the adiuence and more entertaining. I recently met up with someone who is willing to help me out with hint's and tips and get me involved with a channel of his he just said I need some work.

He said he will sit down and help me in about a week's time when the hype of COD:Ghosts has died down (He needs to maintain his channel before he helps me with mine).

All feedback, hint's and tips are welcomed.

S here's the style I came up with today:(straight off the bat)
 
Hey Wizz,

I took a look at your video and didn't find many faults. The only problem I identified was the distortions of air being blown (from your mouth) into the microphone - the 'popping' sound. The distortion itself didn't affect the overall quality but it might be something you want to address. Maybe avoid talking directly into the microphone by talking indirectly but near the microphone. Or invest in a pop-filter if you haven't.

As for the style, I found it entertaining enough to keep me listening to the end. The commentary was clear, informative, and not boring at all; even though I am not much of a fan of the games you spoke about. Comparing it to earlier videos you've made, it is more up-beat versus the more calm/relax feel in previous videos. And, honestly, I didn't find a problem with either styles. And if this is the route you are going for then, at least in my opinion, go for it - 'cuz I don't mind either - they're both good to me.
 
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Jessie Torres said:
Hey Wizz,

I took a look at your video and didn't find many faults. The only problem I identified was the distortions of air being blown (from your mouth) into the microphone - the 'popping' sound. The distortion itself didn't affect the overall quality but it might be something you want to address. Maybe avoid talking directly into the microphone by talking indirectly but near the microphone. Or invest in a pop-filter if you haven't.

As for the style, I found it entertaining enough to keep me listening to the end. The commentary was clear, informative, and not boring at all; even though I am not much of a fan of the games you spoke about. Comparing it to earlier videos you've made, it is more up-beat versus the more calm/relax feel in previous videos. And, honestly, I didn't find a problem with either styles. And if this is the route you are going for then, at least in my opinion, go for it - 'cuz I don't mind either - they're both good to me.
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Wow, such a great comment. Thank you so much for the feedback, I will remember to move my mic from my mouth in future coms!

Thank's for the feedback my friend!
 
its cool:up: i know i only have like 54 subs and you have almost 5k but the only thing i would say is because this is such a common video format nowadays like with the gaming and voice over, make sure you be YOU as much as you can. dont fall into the same pattern as the other guys with vids like this....Try to be as different from those guys doing this as you can or else you'll tend to get overlooked. if you can do or say something to your viewers to make you stand out more, go for it!... but yea haha youre doing fine!!!!
 
AndrewReviewYou said:
Commentary is as solid as it can get. But the air sounds need to go lol
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xyrawwr said:
its cool:up: i know i only have like 54 subs and you have almost 5k but the only thing i would say is because this is such a common video format nowadays like with the gaming and voice over, make sure you be YOU as much as you can. dont fall into the same pattern as the other guys with vids like this....Try to be as different from those guys doing this as you can or else you'll tend to get overlooked. if you can do or say something to your viewers to make you stand out more, go for it!... but yea haha youre doing fine!!!!
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Jessie Torres said:
No problem, man. Keep up the good work
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Hey guys I just created a new thread for a new upload of mine and I tried to work on a few thing's like what you says had said, if you could check it out and post some feedback there, that would be great.

The link is here: (Thread might still need to be approved by the forum mods.)
HTML: 
http://yttalk.com/threads/review.95010/
 
Jennifer Mulkerrin said:
Its a bit rushed but sounds ok other than that, take your time like you would talk to someone in real life! Cheers
Jen
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Thank you Jen, the style I chose for this was an 'up-beat' style and I think I executed that. Thank you for the feedback and I will defo put it into practice!
 
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