The New Travel Blog
I've Got It
I hope it can motivate other youtubers... and I welcome your feedback thanks 
Just made my channel's first trailer... could use a review. It's called "Is Anyone Even Watching?"
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Jacadamia
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Woooooo the cinematography man! THE CINEMATOGRAPHY!!! That was reaaally nice! Especially on the eyes!
hmmmm... it was very dramatic, I could tell that's what you were going for! So congrats on that. It came across as a liiiittle corny at some brief points, but that could just be because I'm so used to high budget things, but for someone on a budget like yours (I'm assuming) It was phenomenal!
The only minor gripes I have are just that your logo pops in before the end kind of awkwardly, it might work better after everything's been said, and that I feel like you didn't give the best closure at the end. You say: "i wonder why I do this..." And then you never really answer it. It makes me want to know the answer and it's really open, but it doesn't pack as much of a punch as it would if you'd say what drove you to do this.
Anyways keep it up! Awesome work!
hmmmm... it was very dramatic, I could tell that's what you were going for! So congrats on that. It came across as a liiiittle corny at some brief points, but that could just be because I'm so used to high budget things, but for someone on a budget like yours (I'm assuming) It was phenomenal!
The only minor gripes I have are just that your logo pops in before the end kind of awkwardly, it might work better after everything's been said, and that I feel like you didn't give the best closure at the end. You say: "i wonder why I do this..." And then you never really answer it. It makes me want to know the answer and it's really open, but it doesn't pack as much of a punch as it would if you'd say what drove you to do this.
Anyways keep it up! Awesome work!
Please Don't Turn Around
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I loved the second part where the music picks up and the energy from the people you're capturing brings life to it all. I feel doing stuff with sunglasses on can come off the wrong way. Your video channel seems to have such an energy for life I might suggest doing anything you say in the future - to say it standing up and/or moving. And/or up against a more visual, breath-taking background. It would fit in more with what you're doing.