It's been a while, I need feedback.

DewyOtter

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I think I may have reached my first point of stagnation. Prior to this point I've been growing and now I can't break the 380 mark so easily anymore. I think my content may be getting sloppy, my editing or something like that.

I'd really appreciate if anyone would take the time to look at my channel and provide feedback. And anything else that comes to mind. I'm not looking for compliments, just the truth.

Thanks in Advance,
Dewy
 
Thumbnails, banner, profile picture, etc. all make your channel look very professional and high quality. Your channel makes the appearance like it will be around for a long time, and I shouldn't be afraid to subscribe.

However, screaming in the mic "OH s**t !!!!!!!" or "f**k IT !"? have you ever thought to possibly bleep that stuff out? I would guess your demographic currently is young adult (teens). If you want people to subscribe, I would definitely recommend appealing to a bigger demographic than just teens. Personally I wouldn't subscribe for that main reason. When I get home from work I watch lots of YouTube videos, sometimes on my TV. If someone were screaming this in to the mic, my wife would tell me to shut that crap off. Even if she wasn't home and I had friends over, they would tell me the exact same thing.
 
Thumbnails, banner, profile picture, etc. all make your channel look very professional and high quality. Your channel makes the appearance like it will be around for a long time, and I shouldn't be afraid to subscribe.

However, screaming in the mic "OH s**t !!!!!!!" or "f**k IT !"? have you ever thought to possibly bleep that stuff out? I would guess your demographic currently is young adult (teens). If you want people to subscribe, I would definitely recommend appealing to a bigger demographic than just teens. Personally I wouldn't subscribe for that main reason. When I get home from work I watch lots of YouTube videos, sometimes on my TV. If someone were screaming this in to the mic, my wife would tell me to shut that crap off. Even if she wasn't home and I had friends over, they would tell me the exact same thing.


Perhaps you're right. I'm willing to invest any efforts necessary, censorship when the amount crosses into excess, or whatever similar. Thank you for your input.
 
I agree. Try bleeping out the cursing. Also, maybe add a little color to you banner to brighten it up a bit. The all blue is somewhat boring. I hope this is helpful!
 
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