Is this a decent intro (only meant to be simple)

[markkaz]

My recommendations.
Take the 'Subscribe' out of your title. You can do that at the end of the video.
Unless "Lets Plays" is gamer lingo that I don't know about, change it to "Let's Play!"

 

[LaggCompensation]

My recommendations.
Take the 'Subscribe' out of your title. You can do that at the end of the video.
Unless "Lets Plays" is gamer lingo that I don't know about, change it to "Let's Play!"

Ahah! Didnt see that spelling mistake .. DERP by me! Thanks for pointing it out!

 

[TheGamersTouch]

-Video in my sig-
This is only meant to be simple, and I'm no good with these flashy after effects, effects and I'm just coming to grips with these editing things!

It looks great! Good job. I just have one thing to say, make the intro shorter because the last few seconds are nothing but audio which is somewhat pointless. Instead of removing it you can also just add more things like "Let's Plays". Other than that it looks awesome!