Is my intro nice?

TheKoki

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Do you think my intro is nice? i made it in After Effects and love it because in my opinion looks nice and bright. The following video is one of my Far Cry 3 Videos, something id like reviewed is if my voice isnt too boring or dull. I dont want to sound ultra hyper, but not asleep. If my voice sounds deep, its cause it is. Cant change that :( . Please, only contructive critisism.

 
Do you think my intro is nice? i made it in After Effects and love it because in my opinion looks nice and bright. The following video is one of my Far Cry 3 Videos, something id like reviewed is if my voice isnt too boring or dull. I dont want to sound ultra hyper, but not asleep. If my voice sounds deep, its cause it is. Cant change that :( . Please, only contructive critisism.

I like it but I think it might be a tad to long generally try to keep the intro short but its still a really nice intro :)
 
Its a nice intro but personally i feel like it could do with being a little but shorter and the lens flares seem a little too overwhelming so maybe make them a little smaller or less bright? hope this helps :-)
 
Its a nice intro but personally i feel like it could do with being a little but shorter and the lens flares seem a little too overwhelming so maybe make them a little smaller or less bright? hope this helps :)
Thank you! ill work on it :)
 
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