Introduction advice please =3

Tboneplaya21

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So I want to make a video talking about who I am and what my plans are for my channel (to link to via annotations), and I was curious...what should I mention in the video? All I ask is that before you comment, read the info below the bold text (to get an idea of exactly what I am trying to accomplish with my channel)

PLEASE READ
My goal for my channel is to create a community of fans. I am looking more toward acquiring viewers and not just hungry for subs. I'd rather have 100 people who watch my videos I post, then 1,000 who occasionally watch whenever. It's not about the money for me. All the money my channel makes will go to bettering the channel (buying giveaway items, getting better equipment, etc.). I want to follow in the footsteps of Markiplier and do charity livestreams and stuff. I'm sure I have more, but I can't think of it.
Thanks for reading!:)
 
i love the intro you have right now. I would work on making it "tighter" though. Your voices keep getting off rhythm with each other throughout the song. Play a click track through your headset to help keep you in time. Then when you line up the videos, they'll all match and it will sound AMAZING.
 
i love the intro you have right now. I would work on making it "tighter" though. Your voices keep getting off rhythm with each other throughout the song. Play a click track through your headset to help keep you in time. Then when you line up the videos, they'll all match and it will sound AMAZING.
Oh I love my channel trailer too haha. the point is for it to sound okay, but not perfect...after all i'm a gaming channel. What i'm working on is more of an intro to me and what I aim to accomplish on my channel. Like i said, I want to build a gaming community/fan base. I don't mind playing an online game with my subscribers (even when/if the number of subs gets to the 100s and up). I'm trying to stand out from the crowd of people who just play games and post it, seeing as how I want more then to be just one of the crowd of thousands.
 
Oh I love my channel trailer too haha. the point is for it to sound okay, but not perfect...after all i'm a gaming channel. What i'm working on is more of an intro to me and what I aim to accomplish on my channel. Like i said, I want to build a gaming community/fan base. I don't mind playing an online game with my subscribers (even when/if the number of subs gets to the 100s and up). I'm trying to stand out from the crowd of people who just play games and post it, seeing as how I want more then to be just one of the crowd of thousands.

I think your current intro tells that story just fine then :)
 
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