Improvements please!

Simply Magic

Active Member
Hello, I'm Simply Magic (I don't do magic things though!)

I have around 350 views
25 sub's
5 videos

All I'm asking is whether you could rate my professionalism of my channel and what I can do to improve and stand out from the crowd!

Thanks!
 
When I clicked on the video about balancing school and youtube, I was confused. No sound? Are my headphones kaputt? You musn't make soundless videos in 2015.
Presentation was boring, because reading text is not what people look for on youtube. Youtube is for watching, talking, doing something.

In your newest video, you at least added some audio, but without commentary or humor factor, this is also boring. You're not going anywhere with that.

As channel name suggest, you have very simple graphic. But I do not think this the best way, though.

Also, how the Youtuber with 5 videos and 25 subs talk about balancing Youtube and school? From viewers' perspective he has no experience and knowledge. That's how I receive it.
 
When I clicked on the video about balancing school and youtube, I was confused. No sound? Are my headphones kaputt? You musn't make soundless videos in 2015.
Presentation was boring, because reading text is not what people look for on youtube. Youtube is for watching, talking, doing something.

In your newest video, you at least added some audio, but without commentary or humor factor, this is also boring. You're not going anywhere with that.

As channel name suggest, you have very simple graphic. But I do not think this the best way, though.

Also, how the Youtuber with 5 videos and 25 subs talk about balancing Youtube and school? From viewers' perspective he has no experience and knowledge. That's how I receive it.
Thanks for checking out my channel!

Um...Yes that's the problem. I am not allowed to do voiceovers/commentaries as in the past this has gotten some harse comments.
I'm only able to just show gameplay.

I'll make sure to try do something about that. But all in all Thanks for visiting!
 
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