I'll review your channel!

MiketheDbacker26 said:
Your content wasn't too bad, the sound quality wasn't top notch, but it was bearable. You have a good personality for these types of videos, in my opinion, but I'd try to be a tad more upbeat! In some videos you seemed kinda bored, or you didn't know what to say, things like that, so try to be more excited! In the videos you did seem upbeat in I thought you were great! Other than that, I think you're doing good, you have a good banner! Just stick to what you're doing and I think you'll find the right balance in time!



Blue snowball = perfect mic haha (same one I use, thing is amazing!), and I love your confidence and voice when you commentate! You sound like you've been at it for a while (I watched your most recent one), and since it's your 4th video, I'd say you're doing fine! The one issue I have though would be the banner. Your logo cuts off part of your name, and it's a little difficult to read at first glance. I'd recommend either making the words a more solid color, or make the background solid, and try to make your name smaller so the logo won't cut it off. But other than that, I think you're off to a great start!
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Thanks for the review and I someone told me about my banner before I just haven't gotten around to so it but I will definitely fix it as soon as possible and really thanks again for the review!
 
MiketheDbacker26 said:
Not too shabby! The video flowed nicely, and I like some of the editing work put in. The one flaw I noticed was audio transitions. A good review in my opinion should sound like it was done in one take (though nobody ACTUALLY/SHOULD do this). A lot of times it sounded like two audio files overlapped, or there were some weird pauses between audio segments that felt..unnatural in way. The quality was fine, though, and overall it wasn't bad, considering it was the first review on your channel.
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Thank you for watching :)

I know what you mean by the audio feeling unnatural, and I can kinda explain why. I did record my script in one take and I tried to do it somewhat fast and lively to make it fit with the theme, look and feel of the game. Naturally, I separated my script into "topic segments", so while I recorded my audio, I would take a break of about 10 seconds between each paragraph so I could get a good idea of the tone I would use for the specific spoken information. Now obviously, the viewer doesn't experience those "pauses" because I edited them out, making it a short video and an easy one to watch. That may be why it feels like each segment is spoken a little differently.

Nonetheless, thank you very much for your feedback.
 
OutBackGaming said:
If you are still doing this mate, could you do a review of my channel?
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Not a bad channel at all! I watched your Outlast video, and I thought it was pretty good! The one thing I do think you could do better is try to take a bit more, sometimes those pauses between talking can be a turn-off for viewers, but when you did talk and commentate I thought it sounded good!

Also, I might change the titles on your videos from BF3 and BF4 to Battlefield 3 and Battlefield 4. When people type stuff in the search engine, the title of your video acts as the #1 tag, and so if people search Battlefield 3 it's unlikely your video would show up, even if you have "Battlefield 3" as a tag. And it just looks more professional, which is always a plus too :)

But overall, I thought everything looked good! The montage you put up came out good, overall your channel isn't too shabby!
 
I'm not sure how to reply to comments but thanks Mike, I have notice that the pause is a put off but I will improve on that :D (I've noticed that I have imrpoved since I have started) but thanks for checking out my channel and reviewing ^.^ (I still have nightmares from outlast... s**t that is scary :( ) :D
 
SethHeart said:
I'll take a Review if you got the time!
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Your commentary wasn't too bad! I don't really have any complains about that, you seemed fairly confident when you spoke, and I found you pretty entertaining! However, you should really try to upload consistently. With the type of videos you upload, I mean a few times each week, at least to help jumpstart your channel. Consistent uploads will keep things fresh for your channel. And speaking of fresh, have you considered playing more games out of Smite and Minecraft? Mainly because you have a GTAV character, but no GTAV videos xD. If you're open to more variety in your games, I'd go for it, but that comes down to your preference.

Regardless, I found your channel to be fairly well done, with just some technical things that could help you out if you sorted through them.
 
I'd like a review as well, of my channel and the videos in, it if you still have the time. The videos are less than 5 minutes long so not too much time involved.
 
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