Hey hello, i would like a review
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Once again I am starting off with channel art. Your avatar does not match your banner, and I certainly see a kind of style in the banner.
You might want to change the banner to, the text is hard to read due to the images in it.
Your channel trailer seems fine, it's not awesome but it's normal, you're introducing yourself which is fine.
I go to your latest video and your intro is fine, for a second I thought, oh this guy doesnt have an intro but thats perfectly fine, then suddenly all dubstep and stuff an intro came out of nowhere. The intro is too long, it just shows your name zooming in and out on the beat, perhaps you might wanna shorten it.
Your audio and video quality is perfect! Your commentary is also good, you do seem to have a bit of an accent but so do I, are you Dutch by any chance?
Also I admire your facecam, it's perfectly well fit in the corner and a normal size, good job on that. In your Wings of Vi video it's a bit too small though, perhaps make it a bit bigger there, or don't use one at all.
My conclusion: Mostly work on your channel art, perhaps create a more original channel trailer, and you might want to add some background music to your videos, it really creates a certain feeling when you use the right background.
For now I'd rate you a 7 out of 10, you've got some things to adjust but there is certainly some potential
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Would Appreciate a review
Your banner is great, but your avatar does not match your banner, make sure the two fit each other. (Why do so many people not get it?
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It seems like you're a tutorial channel for gamers which was easily read in your banner, good job on that.
You do not seem to have a channel trailer but as the kind of channel you are, you don't really need one but if you'd like you can make one.
The first thing that I see is that your thumbnails are strange, with your kind of videos you can really get ALOT of views with good thumbnails so try to improve them alot by making it recognizable by the thumbnail what the video is about.
Your tutorials are easily followed and on your latest video your microphone quality is perfectly fine, so is the video quality.
My conclusion: Keep up with the tutorials but work on your channel art, create yourself a simple and easy style so that videos can easily be recognized and people can see on the thumbnails what you're about.
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Review my channel to your hearts content. Massacre it if it's terrible. Marry it if it's incredible (That may/may not be literal).
Channel art is average, it's not what I say, woah this looks awesome but atleast the avatar and banner match and seem clear.
You don't really have a channel trailer but you show a montage of free kicks which shows what your channel is about, so in this case it's good enough.
I see you've just started so keep up on that, keep the uploads coming and make sure you're consistent in uploading them.
In your latest video you've got a microphone which doesn't seem to have a pop filter, when you pronounce a P you can hear a really loud PFF in the microphone, either move the microphone to your left or something to get rid off that or buy a pop filter
Your microphone seems to have fine quality and so does your video quality.
Your commentary is quick, easy to understand and you are clear in your speaking. I'm not a soccer fanatic but you are doing quite good in your videos.
My conclusion:
You're off to a good start but you gotta make sure to keep the upload stream consistent. You also might want to update the channel art to make it look more like a fifa channel, and perhaps work a bit on improving your thumbnails. Your first thumbnail seems to be your best thumbnail.
I'd rate you a 7,5 out of 10 right now but you would get to an 8 if you've got some more videos and updated the channel art, keep it up
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You placed two posts and didn't even take time to really join this forum, do you think I'm gonna take the time to review your channel? Sorry mate.[DOUBLEPOST=1452161409][/DOUBLEPOST]
I would also love a review!
Alrighty, here we go then!
Your channel art is nailing it, the avatar is a picture of you but it also fits your banner, finally someone who understands how channel art works
I just gotta love the simplicity on your banner, it's good, and even shows me when you upload new videos!
I notice you do not have a channel trailer which you really need. You appear to be a vlogging channel so you really want to INTRODUCE yourself to potential subscribers and viewers, the channel is about you, make sure we know who you are, what you do, what your channel is about.
I go to your latest video and arche my eyebrow for the first second, then smile for the freaking random intro
Your microphone seems to have some noise on the background, try to improve the microphone quality by removing the noise with software such as audacity or buy a better microphone
The background music is perfectly fine and you seem like an interesting person to watch, and your editing is also fine, not great or something, but its fine
My conclusion is very simple and clear. You really want to get a channel trailer to introduce people to your channel!
Also you want to get rid of the noise on the background, especially for channels like you its important to have a clear audio
Your personality seems interesting and I'm sure there's some potential in your channel, so keep it up!
I'd rate you a 7 out of 10 right now and if you'd only create a channel trailer and improve the microphone quality then that'd become an 8, keep it up
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I'd love some constructive criticism, please!
I see where you were going with your channel art, and your banner seems nice but its kinda blurry, probably because you resized it later on. You might wanna remake it and make sure its clear and doesn't look blurry
You also want to adjust your avatar and make it fit your banner!
The channel trailer is amazing, I assume you made the music yourself, if yes, then that's an amazing way to show off your work.
I assume your channel is about vlogs and music covers, so I go to your latest vlogging video and check it out.
Your microphone quality is good, but your video quality itself is mwahhhh, you uploaded the video in 720p and 1080p but there's no way that that camera is recording HD, you should really improve on that camera
I'm not gonna judge on the video otherwise because I am not sure what people like to watch in that genre.
I go to your latest singing video and dang you've got some talent, keep that up!
I've got a conclusion:
Work on your channel art, and most importantly you've really gotta improve your camera quality and in your singing videos your microphone too at some point!
You are so good at singing but your microphone is holding back on that, it's not too bad but later on you might wanna improve on that later on to really get the best quality out of your singing!
For now I'd rate you a 7,5 out of 10 as you've got an original channel which mixes vlogging and singing, which I see fit. Keep it up
