I'll Give Your Channel Feedback :)

Sunzzgaming said:
id love some feedback mate, even if its s**t just tell me its cool and we all use CC to improve :D
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so first off I really liked your banner, it was the first thing that caught my attention when I looked at your channel. Next I really enjoyed watching your channel trailer. I thought that was a very well put together video, and the commentary at the end sounded very sincere. I saw that you were also partnered with Freedom. I'd never heard of them before. Maybe we can talk about them sometime.

Things to improve on:
I found your commentary lacking a bit. There were times during the videos that I was bored. I watched the video through to the end, to give it a fair chance. And don't get me wrong I laughed during a few of them. But for the most part I found myself wanting to do something else. Commentary is the hardest part of a video, especially when you're by yourself. I give you props. I have trouble with it. But, eh maybe try to sound a little more excited. The video I really enjoyed was your first time in Minecraft video.

Anyway, congrats on 100 subs. Not many channels make it that far. I think only about 40% of them do actually. Good luck! :)[DOUBLEPOST=1406734935,1406733988][/DOUBLEPOST]
JoshiLikeYoshi said:
Hello, I am always open to constructive criticism, so I wouldn't be offended if you pointed out the improvements that I could possibly make to my channel if you would review mine and give me feedback! :D Thanks!
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God man, pokemon? Seriously? I haven't played that s**t in ages lol. I miss it! haha.
First things first, you've set up a distinct trait for your channel. You're subscribers and anyone who comes to your channel know that you're channel is about pokemon. Pokemon has been around for a LONG time, and I still think it has a good 10 years before it really becomes part of the past.

Without commentary, I don't think Let's Plays are way to go with your channel though. I think a walkthrough would be better here. Not too many people will look to pokemon to watch when they could go to say.. GTA V or Destiny. But anyone who still plays the game will search for a walkthrough. So that would help keep your videos active for longer. Next I would branch out a little further with pokemon. I like that your keeping updates on newer games to come out. But maybe try Pixelmon (I know Minecraft is $30 so its understandable if you can't), or pokemon stadium sometime, I don't know too many of the games anymore so I'm not really sure what all the possibilities are for a pokemon game.

The most important thing is to make a channel trailer. Channel trailers are what hook the incoming audience. Good luck though! Pokemon was my childhood.
 
Thanks so much for the advice! My main reason for not doing commentary was due to college coming to an end and I still wanted videos going up, so postponed the commentary until my next series. The current one I'm doing is just to show where I started off my love for gaming. Honestly, I really like the suggestion for Pixelmon, and it would be a possibility as my brother has an account for Minecraft, so he would be able to allow me to use it for the series. A channel trailer I will be working on right now actually as I've just been working on getting videos out to show in my channel trailer. Thanks a lot man for the review man, Pokemon is the childhood of a lot of teenagers and adults and a lot of people can remember playing!
 
DoubleBuff Productions said:
Honestly, I enjoyed your channel. Lol I caught myself going back to check out another video after another. Until I realized I watched about 10 of them haha. I like that you've been making a lot of shorter videos about 10 mins long or less. A lot of starting channels make the mistake of making large videos from the start, and unless they're walkthroughs, people aren't going to watch half an hour of someone they don't already enjoy. I have three negatives.
1) Although I enjoyed your Obama channel trailer. Lol it would most likely give off the wrong impression to a first time visitor. It has over 200 views. It's funny, but a lot of people could take that the wrong way and stunt your channels growth.

2) In your description, you said that your channel was a group, but while watching the videos it seemed like there was one main guy playing with his friends.

3) You're a little all over the place with the games you upload, while branching out with your games isn't bad. Smaller channels seem to grow faster when they have a face to their games. Something their fans can put hand in hand with that channel. I really enjoyed your "How to steal a jet in GTA V." I think more videos along that format could help your channel grow. I'm just one person so don't just listen to me. But find what you like most and put a lot of that out. That way people will think "lets go see if The Legendary Tree posted a new GTA."

Other than that, I think your channel deserves a lot more subscribers than it has. And your "Awesomeness" link on your banner was pretty.. awesome. lol
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Wow, we really appreciate it. Yeah I am the only person with a PVR and the only editor so I have to be in all my videos but I always like to include my friends with me cause I wouldn't be able to make the videos without them. We'll definitely have a lot more video series coming out once the new games come out this fall. I wasn't that interested in most of the games that came out this year so far. Other than that we'll improve as much as we can. So thanks, it really means a lot!
 
DoubleBuff Productions said:
so first off I really liked your banner, it was the first thing that caught my attention when I looked at your channel. Next I really enjoyed watching your channel trailer. I thought that was a very well put together video, and the commentary at the end sounded very sincere. I saw that you were also partnered with Freedom. I'd never heard of them before. Maybe we can talk about them sometime.

Things to improve on:
I found your commentary lacking a bit. There were times during the videos that I was bored. I watched the video through to the end, to give it a fair chance. And don't get me wrong I laughed during a few of them. But for the most part I found myself wanting to do something else. Commentary is the hardest part of a video, especially when you're by yourself. I give you props. I have trouble with it. But, eh maybe try to sound a little more excited. The video I really enjoyed was your first time in Minecraft video.

Anyway, congrats on 100 subs. Not many channels make it that far. I think only about 40% of them do actually. Good luck! :)[DOUBLEPOST=1406734935,1406733988][/DOUBLEPOST]
God man, pokemon? Seriously? I haven't played that s**t in ages lol. I miss it! haha.
First things first, you've set up a distinct trait for your channel. You're subscribers and anyone who comes to your channel know that you're channel is about pokemon. Pokemon has been around for a LONG time, and I still think it has a good 10 years before it really becomes part of the past.

Without commentary, I don't think Let's Plays are way to go with your channel though. I think a walkthrough would be better here. Not too many people will look to pokemon to watch when they could go to say.. GTA V or Destiny. But anyone who still plays the game will search for a walkthrough. So that would help keep your videos active for longer. Next I would branch out a little further with pokemon. I like that your keeping updates on newer games to come out. But maybe try Pixelmon (I know Minecraft is $30 so its understandable if you can't), or pokemon stadium sometime, I don't know too many of the games anymore so I'm not really sure what all the possibilities are for a pokemon game.

The most important thing is to make a channel trailer. Channel trailers are what hook the incoming audience. Good luck though! Pokemon was my childhood.
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aw thanks mate i really appreciate the feedback and il work on my commentary :D
 
It would be cool if you had a look at how my overall branding (logo, channel art, thumbnails) works together.
 
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