If you can, Please help me out :)

[ItsOriginalToMe]

So I have been on YouTube for like a month now with 7 subs. I want you yttalkers to review my latest video

or/and check out my other video (they are only 2 minutes). So I would love if you would tell me what you like about the video as well as what I can improve. Also feel free to explore!!!

 

[Jennifer Mulkerrin]

I would recommend investing in some good lighting, and or using natural light, perhaps film near a window. The video you put up here is a tad dark. Also I suggest talking a tiny bit slower like you would to someone in real life. Cheers
Jen

 

[Tahrgat]

Your music also gets in the way sometimes so it would probably be good if you reduced its volume some or increased yours.