iAmLauRawr: Seeking Feedback And Constructive Criticism

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iAmLaurawr

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I need some feedback from others other than my friends, so I decided to drop this thread on here :)
I would like to know your first impressions of the channel and whether you like the branding.

Also down below is the video I would like to recieve feedback on.


This is my most recent video.
I've edited this slightly different to what I normally do, the audio is what I've mainly improved (I hope haha).

Please be honest and let me know what you think I can improve on.​
 
Hey @iAmLaurawr !! Well aren't you clever making an image advertising that you want feedback :) So here it is:
  • I like your channel art. It grabs my attention and it's on the eyes, not too busy as in lots of imagery or text.
  • I like your thumbnails. I was planning on doing something similar in that I was gonna try a format that wasn't just a plain normal rectangle. Cool that you went that route!
  • I had my choice of videos and decided first to watch your I'm Back video from a month ago. Nice high quality video and audio. And my was I impressed how well you could drive in GTA and look up at the camera from time to time without getting too crazy on the roads :)
  • As for the video you request a review on...well that's just some talented editing right there. Looks like it took a week to edit. But at the same time, I'm glad it was short else I'd probably walk away from it being pretty dizzy lol Wish I had some constructive criticism but I'm cool with what I've seen!
Congrats on your success thus far. Easy to see why you have so many fans. Keep up the awesome work. :thumbsup2:
 
Wow I like your editing and putting the music on the particular scene and zooming the scene :P
I think the audio is nice! I like your outro!
I wish you all the best :D
 
Riddikore said:
Hey @iAmLaurawr !! Well aren't you clever making an image advertising that you want feedback :) So here it is:
  • I like your channel art. It grabs my attention and it's on the eyes, not too busy as in lots of imagery or text.
  • I like your thumbnails. I was planning on doing something similar in that I was gonna try a format that wasn't just a plain normal rectangle. Cool that you went that route!
  • I had my choice of videos and decided first to watch your I'm Back video from a month ago. Nice high quality video and audio. And my was I impressed how well you could drive in GTA and look up at the camera from time to time without getting too crazy on the roads :)
  • As for the video you request a review on...well that's just some talented editing right there. Looks like it took a week to edit. But at the same time, I'm glad it was short else I'd probably walk away from it being pretty dizzy lol Wish I had some constructive criticism but I'm cool with what I've seen!
Congrats on your success thus far. Easy to see why you have so many fans. Keep up the awesome work. :thumbsup2:
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Hey there,

Thank you for the lovely comments Riddikore :)
I might tone down the editing a little then if it made you a tad dizzy haha

Thanks again :)

Jawad Soomro said:
Wow I like your editing and putting the music on the particular scene and zooming the scene :p
I think the audio is nice! I like your outro!
I wish you all the best :D
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Thank you very much :)
The outro was one of the parts im most proud of haha

I wish you the best as well :)
 
Watched your mounting friends.
You need to change your avatar. you essentially cropepd it from your banner.
Banner is awesome
Thumbnails are awesome
Commentary is awesome
Your transitions are very hard to watch. Way to quick. It felt like every 10 seconds you were zooming. It honestly gave me a headache. If I saw this video and saw that editing I would not sub and leave. Soemthing to work on
 
ProjectXerxes said:
Watched your mounting friends.
You need to change your avatar. you essentially cropepd it from your banner.
Banner is awesome
Thumbnails are awesome
Commentary is awesome
Your transitions are very hard to watch. Way to quick. It felt like every 10 seconds you were zooming. It honestly gave me a headache. If I saw this video and saw that editing I would not sub and leave. Soemthing to work on
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Hey Xerxes, thanks for the feedback and critique :)
For now i'll leave the avatar as be due to my subscribers knowing thats me when a video is uploaded.
(It's my channel branding in a way)
However, when I have the time I shall draw another version of myself so its not the same :)
Also, seeing as you and another have mentioned the transitioning being way too much and causing a headache I shall tone it down ^_^
That feedback helps me a lot.
Thank you :)
 
As others have said, a bit less zooms and you are golden. Keep up the good work.

PS: Can't not mention i had a few nice laughs looking at your videos. :D
 
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