I will review your channel.

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Thank you for the feedback friend!
One thing you said you clicked on a SOMA video, I've never played Soma. What did you mean? :)
 
OOOHHH! I WANNA BE ROASTED! Seriously though, I can improve on things I am doing incorrectly, I don't need a damn medal for the things I'm doing properly already, so hit me with it, tell me how much I balls everything up on my recent content xD
 
I have mainly my main content, but I do have a few Let's Plays when I was trying to do that a little. And then I just have videos of me being awesome at Final Fantasy or Kingdom Hearts, but without dialog.
 
TheAlphaJayShow said:
Go for it.
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Your channel is actually pretty dang good!
Your quality is decent although I think the video can be a bit bigger than what you are showing (I could be wrong)
Your intro is a bit weird for what you are doing.
Although you just started so I guess it's whatever.
On your most recent video your intro about how you are going and stuff you could have made that a separate video.
You kept on using the intro of the show over and over again on specific spots.
I know there is not a lot of content out when you are reviewing one episode but it just looks bland.

As for your lets plays
Meh.
They are sort of boring but that is more my style of humor. The quality is nice but you don't have much of a "funny persona" that a lot of people want in a lets player.
I don't know if that is what you are going for or not but yeah.

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You have a pretty good start on your channel. Keep this up man, although work on your lets plays.
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KooL KiD Gamers! said:
go for it sirrr :-P
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Ah a game reviewer like me.
Finally lol

Your intro is horrible man. A LOT of people hate those text intros.
Try and figure out an animating program and make something a bit more personal.
ALTHOUGH
You just started so don't worry about it.

FOR AUDIO : Your vocal audio is a bit to quiet with the music in the background. Sometimes it gets hard to understand you cause the music invades it.

FOR VIDEO : When you place pictures or something on your video to show expression make sure to give them their own come in and come out.
Don't just pop them it. It looks unfinished.
You could either tween them in or do it FBF.

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You're not bad, it looks like you are just learning the programs but you need to learn them before making the videos.
At least the basics man.

Your vocal audio is to quiet and the music sometimes blocks out what you are saying. Either bump up the audio or turn down the music.
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CautiousCrowe said:
OOOHHH! I WANNA BE ROASTED! Seriously though, I can improve on things I am doing incorrectly, I don't need a damn medal for the things I'm doing properly already, so hit me with it, tell me how much I balls everything up on my recent content xD
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Glad you are up for the harsh criticism if any.

Your thumbnails are garbage. (Mine are pretty bad as well so I mean I can't really say much on helping with that)
I use Pixlr for mine if that helps any. You can have separate layers and stuff.

I watched HOLY BRITISH! (gmod prop hunt) and eh. It's a bit to random for me. Your edits are okay but you do them WAAAAYYY TOOOO MUCH.
and they just make it all just bland.

It was not all that funny to me. Your edits are okay though so you got that.

Another video is your undertale series.
30 minutes is way to long.
Cut them down to 10 minutes a pop. More videos and people might want to come back since it's so short.
Also why is your mouse to the right? come on man you're better than that.
Your facecam's quality is also kind of s**t. Like try to angle it or something and put it on the bottom.
That always looks better.

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Make better thumbnails.
Your editing is okay but needs to be refined. Also stop using so many picture edits in your videos. It takes away from the gameplay.
30 minute gameplay videos are horrible especially when you first start out on youtube. Bump them down to about 10 minutes.
If you put your mouse cursor on any other of your videos I swear on me mum.
Get a better camera for facecam.
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Idec Sdawkminn said:
I have mainly my main content, but I do have a few Let's Plays when I was trying to do that a little. And then I just have videos of me being awesome at Final Fantasy or Kingdom Hearts, but without dialog.
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I...I don't know what your channel is.

I don't


I don't know if I should be scared or.
 
Thanks a lot! I honestly think that people should receive more honest criticism like this, nobody grows on youtube by being babied all the time. I will put some consideration into what you've said.
 
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