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A vlog series I started following production of my Minecraft Adventure Quest Map Thing.
Sorry dude....my connection is slow and this video lasts 13 min....i will review it on monday ok?
I wont forget about it
I want to review ya stuff!
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Sorry dude....my connection is slow and this video lasts 13 min....i will review it on monday ok?
I wont forget about it
Lewis McGlade
I've Got It
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Lewis McGlade
I've Got It
yh thats okay mate 
George Raymond
Now a major part of Ayre...
Please review my video!! Thanks!
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A vlog series I started following production of my Minecraft Adventure Quest Map Thing.
1.I like the way you approach the audience...talking about your brother and stuff.Its nice that you dont go strictly on the topic.
2.And while you were talking about your future video you showed your map.Thats a nice combination
3.Nice review of the map.
4.Comedy lines were on the point.Even when your serious. 4:33
Umm in all nice video 9/10
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Ummmm....
1.the first 20 secs of the video was pointless.You were speaking off topic and it sound boring.
2.You singing "Syndicate" wasnt funny.
3.You had some fnny moments tho 3:25 was good scene
4.OW OW OW was great.
5.Presentation of the game wasnt really awsome...the show case only starts at 5:06...you should have cut those stupid skits and intros to the game.
Sorry for this hard hitting feedback.Thats just my opinion.No hate and keep doing your stuff man!
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Whoop whoop......your getting a feedback on a rap song from a rapper now get ready!
1.Lyrics are funny.But if you are trying to be a rapper then you have to use multie rhymes:
Hi jack
My cat
By that
2.Video was ok....not great but solid.
3.YOU HAVE TO BUY A NEW MICROPHONE!!!!!!!!!!! The sound quality is awfull.That may ruin the whole song my dude.
in all good video
7/10
If you get better quality then it would be 10/10
George Raymond
Now a major part of Ayre...
Thanks, it is only our second video and so we are just getting into things and we don't have a good mic atm.1.I like the way you approach the audience...talking about your brother and stuff.Its nice that you dont go strictly on the topic.
2.And while you were talking about your future video you showed your map.Thats a nice combination
3.Nice review of the map.
4.Comedy lines were on the point.Even when your serious. 4:33
Umm in all nice video 9/10
--- merged: Mar 5, 2012 1:14 PM ---
Ummmm....
1.the first 20 secs of the video was pointless.You were speaking off topic and it sound boring.
2.You singing "Syndicate" wasnt funny.
3.You had some fnny moments tho 3:25 was good scene
4.OW OW OW was great.
5.Presentation of the game wasnt really awsome...the show case only starts at 5:06...you should have cut those stupid skits and intros to the game.
Sorry for this hard hitting feedback.Thats just my opinion.No hate and keep doing your stuff man!
--- merged: Mar 5, 2012 1:23 PM ---
Whoop whoop......your getting a feedback on a rap song from a rapper now get ready!
1.Lyrics are funny.But if you are trying to be a rapper then you have to use multie rhymes:
Hi jack
My cat
By that
2.Video was ok....not great but solid.
3.YOU HAVE TO BUY A NEW MICROPHONE!!!!!!!!!!! The sound quality is awfull.That may ruin the whole song my dude.
in all good video
7/10
If you get better quality then it would be 10/10
Natacha Martins
The First Lady of YTTALK
thanks so much for doing this, its really nice of you, here's one of my videos
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Ok...
1:Re-size your video.....you got some nice quality but resizing it will mae it look better.
2:All that eating Cinnamon thing is cool.And a bit funny(especially ending)
3:You should have just cut those "blah,blah,blah" scenes.Tho they dont make the video look bad.
4:In future videos try to do some crazy things.Try to think of things that nobody yet did.
in all 8/10
Natacha Martins
The First Lady of YTTALK
Ok...
1:Re-size your video.....you got some nice quality but resizing it will mae it look better.
2:All that eating Cinnamon thing is cool.And a bit funny(especially ending)
3:You should have just cut those "blah,blah,blah" scenes.Tho they dont make the video look bad.
4:In future videos try to do some crazy things.Try to think of things that nobody yet did.
in all 8/10
I'll Take it all into consideration thank you.