I shall do reviews :)
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Ariel Davis
I've Got It
I'd love a review, thank you! :3
Mithril
YTtalk Mad
Love the avatar, love the channel banner. They go together very well and they're crisp and clear. I'd be a little more descriptive in the channel names. Not only does it make the video more appealing, it'll help get you higher in the search results and allow you to be a related video to other similar videos.
Maybe you should cut out the intro... It's generic and doesn't really fit with the theme of the channel. Also, maybe sound a bit more...enthusiastic? I watched "Road to Crystal 1 th 8" and you sound like you're about to fall asleep... On the bright side, the video quality is very nice.
These things can all potentially be quick fixes so good luck on your channel!
Thanks
I like you, you're funny, fun, bubbly, and you have good audio and video quality
I'd change up the channel banner though... It's busy and hard to read and the color is cloying on the eyes...Hmm...I'd suggest making a concerted effort to look straight into the camera while talking. Sometimes you're looking at the camera, and other times, you're looking off, presumably at the display on the camcorder. Other than that, I think your videos are great! The quality is up there, the content is nice, and the editing great.[DOUBLEPOST=1396748101,1396747375][/DOUBLEPOST]
I'm not really sure what you want me to review since it seems like most of your videos aren't really yours...
I'd like a review thanks a lot man!
You're channel banner's pretty nice, but the "Subsribe, Like, Comment" on the right is a bit blurry. You might want to fix that... I was watching your latest Goat Simulator vid and I think you should lower the volume of the music and raise the volume of your voice since it's a bit hard to hear. Also, maybe speak with a bit more enthusiasm and with more diction (less mumbling).
Also, maybe consider making more unified looking thumbnails across the channel instead of the default generic ones. Good luck on you channel!
Hmm, the first thing I notice on your channel is this bright green, very simple channel banner screaming at me. It's a bit outputting, I must admit. I'd recommend changing that. Also, you seem to slouch a bit because the camcorder is placed beneath your eye level. I'd recommend raising it so you can look straight at it. It'll let you sit with better posture which will help you breath better and therefore speak with more force. Also, less fidgeting while you talk. Beyond that, your voice is good, the audio/video quality is good. Just small suggestions to make you even better. Good luck![DOUBLEPOST=1396749580][/DOUBLEPOST]
Hello, I am new and wouldnt mind a review. Anything harsh is okay just tell me how to improve. And do check any of my review videos and say where I can improve
Thanks You Kind Sir and your channel is great. I checked it
I love the branding on your channel. The avatar's great, the banner's great, the intro's fantastic!
Hmm, what's up with the sound on your vids? Some of them are panned to the right and some of them are panned to the left. I'd recommend keeping it mono since your channel doesn't really seem to call for any panning of the sound around. Also, sometimes the sound in the actual video is much softer than the intro so it's a bit annoying.
Either way, the video editing is very nice and good luck on your channel!
The thumbnails are of good quality, but they're a bit generic, just like every other Minecraft video, but I guess that can't be helped. The avatar and banner are good quality, so that's good. I'd suggest fixing the grammar and capitalization in the video names and the "about" for the channel because it'll make it more professional. The audio quality is very nice though. Good luck!
Can you do my channel too please but mainly my 1 year anniversary special , also i know a lot of people have said this but your voice is perfect for the videos you produce , clear, concise and interesting
My channel. http://m.youtube.com/user/TheTyGuys
Love the avatar, love the banner! Very fun, good colors, easy to read.
Hmm, I find it a bit weird how you pronounce "Vee-log" I've always just heard "vlog" just as one word. Like blog, but with a "v".
I'm a bit confused about the video "No More Room in Hell #2 A Journey to ASDA". You say AS-da when in the first shot, the green sign clearly says AD-sa
Anyway, the audio quality is very nice and you guys speak very clearly. And have cool accents, haha! Good luck on the channel!
Review pls
Avatar, very nice. Banner, very nice. I'm not really into motorsports, but the video quality seems to be very nice. You also have very descriptive titles which is definitely very good. The videos are very fun to watch, even though I don't participate in or have any interest in the topic. Good luck on the channel!
When I click on the button, it says your channel doesn't exist... You might want to fix that...
Hmm..err honestly, your video intro kinda looks like an educational film. Maybe that's the look you were going for? Just not really my cup of tea. The music's a but loud for the volume of your voice. It just kinda drowns it out a bit.
I've also noticed some funky grammar going on around your channel. Randomly capitalized words you shouldn't capitalize in the description, lack of punctuation, among other things. The avatar text is too small so I'd recommend leaving that part off altogether and I'd recommend getting a channel banner. Also, write something in the About section. It'll add keywords to your channel and improve it's place in search.
I know you're just starting out, but that also means you can drastically improve. Good luck on your channel![DOUBLEPOST=1396750844][/DOUBLEPOST]
I think your avatar and banner are very nice! The first thing I noticed was the audio quality which is very good. Also, unlike many other channels, your voice is very bright, open, and...well, happy sounding!
A note of advice for the future: The lower right corner of the thumbnail can't be seen by people because it's where YouTube shows how long the video is it's not the best idea to put anything important there (Spyro thumbnails)
Also, fill out your video descriptions! It allows for more interaction and if you take full advantage of it, the search engines can find your video more easily from the keywords in the description.
Good luck with your channel!
Hmm, your banner's pretty nice, but something's a bit off about it... Maybe increase the contrast between the background and the text in front. I was watching your "Hormones" video and notice that the light is WAY TOO BRIGHT. It whitened your face completely, which is not desirable. Maybe close the blinds if it's a window or drape a blanket over it. Or move to a different room. It may also help to fiddle around with the settings on your camcorder to fix it. Other than that, the video quality is very good, the audio quality is good, and you are a very entertaining person. Good luck on your channel!
I would like a review of my channel
The avatar and banner are of good quality, though the theme doesn't really have anything to do with your channel...
I love the video intro! It's beautiful! I'd recommend maybe limiting the cussing, because well, it'll help make you more appealing to a wider audience. I'd also recommend making custom thumbnails for your vids. The generic minecraft screenshots make it blend into the background of what I'm convinced is literally the most played game on YouTube. Stand out! The first step is thumbnails. The voices are a bit...not together, like some of them are much louder or softer than others and the music sometimes makes it harder to understand.
Also, clean up the grammar in the video titles. Some words are capitalized, some aren't, it's all very confusing. And upload more often! It's been four weeks since an update! Anyway, good luck on your channel!
Your video intros are kind of simple. Just panning over your logo... And it's not very interesting. It's too long for something that stays the same the whole time. I was watching "Why Video Games Are Good For You" and you sound kind of sick and nasal. Maybe do some vocal exercises or just wait until you're better before making a video.
I do like your thumbnails quite a bit
Good luck on your channel!
TheManCave
I've Got It
Well...since you're offering Review mine please!!!
P.S.Don't base your review on my channel trailer alone.I'm currently in the middle of editing a new one to be uploaded sometime next week.
Review mine please!!! P.S.Don't base your review on my channel trailer alone.I'm currently in the middle of editing a new one to be uploaded sometime next week.
ExtroseGamerAE
Loving YTtalk
I'd love a quick overview review of my channel, if you don't mind!
Mithril
YTtalk Mad
Would love a review thanks
Hmm, on the first video, I'm wondering why the camera is so far away from the table. There's a lot of empty space around the focus of the video. Also, I'd stay away from using the default iMovie music I believe? It's just cheesy and overdone. Find some more original free royalty free music. Also, maybe go somewhere with less background noise to film the video. There are tons of random noises in the background. You guys are quite entertaining though, and I like that you're taking this seriously by using correct grammar, capitalization, spelling, etc. in your descriptions, comment replies, etc. I would change the banner though... It looks kinda...to bright and a lot like a bad gaming channel. Good luck on your channel!
ShadowHDD
Well-Known Member
Thank you for the reviews
I will work on what you have pointed out And again thank you for the review
Kind Regards
- ShadowHDD