Ok, I'll give you my opinion, and I'll be as harsh as possible. Lol. First of all, when I went to your channel I was greeted by a blank page. You don't have an Avatar, no cover image, and the default landing page is your activity. I'd fix these thing immediately. Change the default to the normal landing page, create playlists of your videos and record a welcome/unsubscriber video for people to see. Make a banner and pick an avatar so people have an image of you to remember you by. A lot of people think that YouTube is all about the videos, but I really don't think it is. It's about creating a brand and selling it.
As far as your videos are concerned, I watch one of them called Naping Connoisseur. I thought that it was funny for awhile, but you got stuck in the trap of retelling a joke for too long. Also, I felt like I interrupted a conversation when I started the video, you were almost midsentence of telling your story, there wasn't an introduction. Overall, it's not bad, you have stuff to work with, but you do have room for improvement. I hope that wasn't too harsh!
