I Need Your Criticism

[KillStrake]

I made a funny moments video from us playing minecraft. The video is 3:30 and I want to know if it is funny enough, and tips for making it funnier.

 

[TheProGamerJay]

To make it more funny - edit it a bit more - add some music, add intro etc... hope this helps - maybe check out my channel in return ? XD

 

[Kelkschiz]

You got a bit of a Beavis and Butt-head thing going on there. Perhaps you can develop it a bit more. It's quite entertaining.