I need VERY constructive criticism. (Will return favor)

The only thing major that you could improve is maybe the intro. Everything else is ok. Some people maybe put off that you maybe a bit younger but that doesn't bother me too much. Overall your channel is good. Maybe in the long run invest in a good microphone as that will set you apart from other starting youtubers who have average sound.

Hope this helps. Please check out my channel and give some feedback. If you enjoy them please subscribe as I am trying to reach 100 by the end of the year :)
 
It's not really my type of video, so I don't know how much feedback I can give. I clicked around a bit because 25 minutes is really long. I actually like the intro, it's pretty funny with the orange pulsing to the beat but I have a strange sense of humor...

You're quite personable and seem comfortable in front of camera which is good. Is there any real direction to the series or is it just you doing random stuff in Minecraft? I couldn't get a sense of the point of the video as I was skipping through.
 
WorldOfSupercars said:
The only thing major that you could improve is maybe the intro. Everything else is ok. Some people maybe put off that you maybe a bit younger but that doesn't bother me too much. Overall your channel is good. Maybe in the long run invest in a good microphone as that will set you apart from other starting youtubers who have average sound.

Hope this helps. Please check out my channel and give some feedback. If you enjoy them please subscribe as I am trying to reach 100 by the end of the year :)
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Actually your intros are Ok, its just because I watched the short video with the intro:) soz
 
WorldOfSupercars said:
The only thing major that you could improve is maybe the intro. Everything else is ok. Some people maybe put off that you maybe a bit younger but that doesn't bother me too much. Overall your channel is good. Maybe in the long run invest in a good microphone as that will set you apart from other starting youtubers who have average sound.

Hope this helps. Please check out my channel and give some feedback. If you enjoy them please subscribe as I am trying to reach 100 by the end of the year :)
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Your channel is really cool because i'm really interested in supercars and the only thing I say you could improve on is maybe put some music behind the video to make it more interesting, but besides that I really like your channel. Hope this helps.[DOUBLEPOST=1434057261,1434057109][/DOUBLEPOST]
Agufish said:
It's not really my type of video, so I don't know how much feedback I can give. I clicked around a bit because 25 minutes is really long. I actually like the intro, it's pretty funny with the orange pulsing to the beat but I have a strange sense of humor...

You're quite personable and seem comfortable in front of camera which is good. Is there any real direction to the series or is it just you doing random stuff in Minecraft? I couldn't get a sense of the point of the video as I was skipping through.
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The direction for the series is to just in the future make a giant castle/kingdom. I like your channel btw, i'm really into music and you're very good at the guitar. Overall nice channel :)
 
JackLikesOranges said:
Your channel is really cool because i'm really interested in supercars and the only thing I say you could improve on is maybe put some music behind the video to make it more interesting, but besides that I really like your channel. Hope this helps.[DOUBLEPOST=1434057261,1434057109][/DOUBLEPOST]
The direction for the series is to just in the future make a giant castle/kingdom. I like your channel btw, i'm really into music and you're very good at the guitar. Overall nice channel :)
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Thanks for the feedback. In my latest video I have just uploaded there is music in the background but a lot of people prefer no music when the car is moving/accelerating so they hear the engine and the noise. I will add music from now on into the background of non moving cars from now on
 
I'll just list off some quick pros and cons on your channel.

Pros:
-Good commentary; you are constantly talking, no dead noise
-Good video and audio quality, audio can always be improved, but it depends on your budget (I'm still working on mine haha)
-Good thumbnails
-Good banner and icon
-Good variety with videos

Cons:
-Videos are a bit too long, some quick cuts between travelling or boring gameplay would be an easy way to trim them down to around 10-15 minutes
-The intro to your funny moments was a bit bland, since you just went over the thumbnail, it isn't really necessary
- Your commentary while good, lacks a lot of enthusiasm, try to put a bit more excitement into your voice so the viewer is constantly entertained.

All in all your channel is off to a good start, I'd suggest only uploading one video a day though, if you upload too much at this size, you'll burn out fast.
If you have any feedback for me, go ahead and tell me! I'm always looking to improve!
 
Ninja said:
I'll just list off some quick pros and cons on your channel.

Pros:
-Good commentary; you are constantly talking, no dead noise
-Good video and audio quality, audio can always be improved, but it depends on your budget (I'm still working on mine haha)
-Good thumbnails
-Good banner and icon
-Good variety with videos

Cons:
-Videos are a bit too long, some quick cuts between travelling or boring gameplay would be an easy way to trim them down to around 10-15 minutes
-The intro to your funny moments was a bit bland, since you just went over the thumbnail, it isn't really necessary
- Your commentary while good, lacks a lot of enthusiasm, try to put a bit more excitement into your voice so the viewer is constantly entertained.

All in all your channel is off to a good start, I'd suggest only uploading one video a day though, if you upload too much at this size, you'll burn out fast.
If you have any feedback for me, go ahead and tell me! I'm always looking to improve!
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Thank you so much for the review! I agree my videos can be bland, especially during travelling in videos or when i have nothing to say so I will definitely put more effort in to editing! I really like the ways that you used pros and cons in my review so I will do the same for you ^_^

Pros:
Great banner, I really like how it's drawn and cartoony
Funny intro, Idk I have a weird sense of humor :3
Mature voice, I hope I can have that soon ;)
Good sense of humor
Clear microphone

Cons:
Sometimes a little dull commentary
Some long pauses in a few videos (commentary)

Once again thanks for the feedback! I am definitely subscribing to your channel!
 
JackLikesOranges said:
Thank you so much for the review! I agree my videos can be bland, especially during travelling in videos or when i have nothing to say so I will definitely put more effort in to editing! I really like the ways that you used pros and cons in my review so I will do the same for you ^_^

Pros:
Great banner, I really like how it's drawn and cartoony
Funny intro, Idk I have a weird sense of humor :3
Mature voice, I hope I can have that soon ;)
Good sense of humor
Clear microphone

Cons:
Sometimes a little dull commentary
Some long pauses in a few videos (commentary)

Once again thanks for the feedback! I am definitely subscribing to your channel!
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Thanks for the feedback! Can you tell me which videos you watched? Just so I know what to improve on (I'm assuming my CSGO stuff)
 
That Agario game was very fun to watch you play. I'm not overly fond of the intro, but it's no worse than RoosterTeeth's, so I can't really complain. I don't usually like watching gamer channels unless it is a really hard game and the person gets really mad and frustrated.
 
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