I need some editing advice

[DZaw]

I just finished a my second video edit and it would be great if I could get some advice on how to improve I believe it is better than my last one.

Next video my focus will be to have better video effects and cleaner picture.

Any review would be very helpful and if you don't know much about editing was the video fun to watch? Do you know anyone better than me at editing that would be interested in teaching me?

Thanks

 

[MannyIzzy]

It was cute together pretty smooth man and really cut well with the score the only issue was the sound track was a bit load and couldn't hear what they where saying and so it started to drag for me as it is an 8min video so maybe working on pacing as well. It all things we struggle with at first man and I'm still trying to slove this problems as well. I would love a review from the editing of this video

 

[DZaw]

Thanks for the review, I'll take that into consideration in the next video.
I watched your video and enjoyed it. It was well cut, funny topic, and the audio is clear.