I need some advice on my channel plz :3

[FrazZii]

I am wanting to know if my content is lacking some originality on my channel because I can't see it myself but I have noticed that in my first couple of videos they were kind of dull and then in the ones that I have uploaded recently seem to be a little bit better so I need some help/advice from you guys to see if my content is ok/good for the time being until I finish my lets play that I am doing at the moment.
My youtube is FrazZii

 

[TheTacomaKing]

Thats pretty natural if you think about it. Your first couple are bound to be a bit dull, almost awkward, but then they get better as you become more comfortable with commentating. Your latest episode of Amnesia was better than the first by far (only two i watched for comparison)

 

[FrazZii]

Thats pretty natural if you think about it. Your first couple are bound to be a bit dull, almost awkward, but then they get better as you become more comfortable with commentating. Your latest episode of Amnesia was better than the first by far (only two i watched for comparison)

ah kay thanks

 

[Secret Peters]

Yeah, the first couple of videos I did on my channel are horrific, but I mean you get better, especially with being in front of the camera. Just keep working and putting in the effort and you will come into your own. I find its all about comfort and since I've started I'm way more comfortable and as a result perform better in my videos.

 

[OJandEggs]

Your new videos are much better only piece of advice I could give would be to make the resolution higher on the game to get rid of the black lines And maybe lower the volume a tiny bit but other then that the videos are really entertaining!

 

[FrazZii]

Your new videos are much better only piece of advice I could give would be to make the resolution higher on the game to get rid of the black lines And maybe lower the volume a tiny bit but other then that the videos are really entertaining!

thanks and I know about the resolution I have sorted that out in 2 videos and I forgot to do it for the 7th and when I realised this I was like nooooooooooooooooooooo XD and as for the volume I will do that so thanks.

 

[OJandEggs]

thanks and I know about the resolution I have sorted that out in 2 videos and I forgot to do it for the 7th and when I realised this I was like nooooooooooooooooooooo XD and as for the volume I will do that so thanks.

Oh and I used to have that problem in all my early videos XD and no problem buddy

 

[GameWithCJ]

The black bars are an instant offput, you lack a custom thumbnail what can really brand your videos. Your voice can be really 'overpowering' at some points and have an off-putting effect on my ears - You have a really nice voice. Sounds really fake.

Sorry :L Keep making videos, i will continue to watch! Just trying to help!

 

[FrazZii]

The black bars are an instant offput, you lack a custom thumbnail what can really brand your videos. Your voice can be really 'overpowering' at some points and have an off-putting effect on my ears - You have a really nice voice. Sounds really fake.

Sorry :L Keep making videos, i will continue to watch! Just trying to help!

Thank you I needed someone to say something like this so I can try improve them also I have sorted the black lines for my videos after 7 and what do you mean by my voice is realy overpowering and that it sounds fake just out of curiosity?