I need feedback | Please be mean.

TheMrAverageGamer

TheMrAverageGamer

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Hey guys I'm a pretty new commentator and I really want some feedback on my channel. Please be mean, I don't want feedback if you're just going to say "great vids, keep up the good work". I want some feedback I can use to better my channel. Thanks - TheMrAverageGamer
 
well we cant give u much feedback since you only have one video lol. but i like your commentating you keep it informative, just make sure that you first explain what the gameplay is about first like what game type it is and what KD you ended with. for your future commentaries try to always do something different because there's a million and one other people doing what ur doing, so try to stand out even though its gonna be hard to do so :) and most of all HAVE FUN!!. i subscribed to your channel looking forward for more content.....oh and check out my channel too lol :):cool:
 
Thanks for the feedback but I have 5 videos. Lol maybe check those out? I checked out your channel and I subscribed :)

BTW you should try to fix the background noise in your videos, if you want I can show you how :)
 
Hey there.

You've got the talking side of things covered, a good flow of conversation and interesting topics. A little background noise here and there though, you just have to be careful with that.

I'm not so sure about your intro, as even remixes can be considered copyrighted content. I also think its the sort of intro you would have for perhaps clips or montages, not intellectual commentary over gameplay but thats just me.

I'd say you are doing very well for someone only up a few days on Youtube though, and credit is deserved for looking for feedback. Keep it up buddy.
 
Thanks for the tips, I'm thinking of using it for OCE not sure yet. The song I used is copyright free and it's under 10 seconds so I believe it falls under the free use terms not positive though. I'm trying to find my weak points to try to clear them up. Thanks for the help :)
 
You have a good style on your videos, try and make the video quality better by adding some colour correction, and when you talk try and be upbeat as it makes people more inclined to listen to you, and watch back videos when you have finished it to see if you would like it to be uploaded, other than that, the topics are good, keep it up, and make a series out of the rocky starts video, if you have any questions skype me :) Skype: nathan.loosley
 
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