I made a NEW INTRO in After Effects. Can I get some feedback?

[Pedro Nascimento]

Hello everyone,

For the past 2 month I have been learning how to use the software Adobe After Effects.
I made now my first intro for my channel, it has 5 sec.
I would like to have some feedback to know if it is good on not.

youtube.com/CitiesOfTheRealWorld

I would appreciate any feedback given.
Thank you

 

[HumbleZeus]

Nice into mate good job , the only thing I would say is try to make the transition from the intro into the actual video smoother. The intro seems more like it just abruptly cuts off. Other than that though really nice job

 

[thefedoranerd]

I think your video quality is great, maybe you need a new intro to match the quality of your videos. Also the text in your thumbnails is hard to read, maybe make it bigger and add a border to the text so it's easier to read.

 

[Pedro Nascimento]

Nice into mate good job , the only thing I would say is try to make the transition from the intro into the actually video smoother. The intro seems more like it just abruptly cuts off. Other than that though really nice job

Thank you HumbleZeus,

I went to watch my videos again to be more aware of the transition and I realize that yes, I have to make that change.
I'm am going to upload a video tonight about a German city, Frankfurt. I have been there 2 days ago. I will make the transition smother.

 

[HumbleZeus]

Thank you HumbleZeus,

I went to watch my videos again to be more aware of the transition and I realize that yes, I have to make that change.
I'm am going to upload a video tonight about a German city, Frankfurt. I have been there 2 days ago. I will make the transition smother.

No problem mate anything to help out

 

[Pedro Nascimento]

maybe you need a new intro to match the quality of your videos. Also the text in your thumbnails is hard to read, maybe make it bigger and add a border to the text so it's easier to read.

About the intro, I know that I need a new intro with better quality, but the thing is that I am new to after effects and to make this intro was a huge challenge to me. I am now working on new ideas for the next intro, but it will take a while, if you have any suggestion please I would appreciate.

About the thumbnails, I was aware that a small letter size would be hard to read so I took that in consideration when I made them. I am using a Macbook Pro Retina when you almost can't see the pixels, so its easy to read my thumbnails even 1 meter away from the screen. I don't know about other screens but I will make the font size a bit bigger and increase the black shadow.

Thanks a lot for the feedback, when I upload a new video in 2 or 3 hours I will say something just for you to check if it's better..

 

[thefedoranerd]

A little note on intros, make sure it's no longer than five seconds. I made that mistake before because people lose interest online very fast.

 

[Pedro Nascimento]

A little note on intros, make sure it's no longer than five seconds. I made that mistake before because people lose interest online very fast.

I was aware that I could only make it between 3 to 5 sec. The intro has precisely 5 sec.
There is a lot to learn and we have to put a lot of effort to make a channel grow, if you could give me some more tips I would appreciate. Feedback is a gift!!