How would you rate my latest video?

[ElliottSplash]

Hi everyone, been a while since i've posted here, been working on a few other projects lately.

I've just made a video around 3 hours ago and i'd love some feedback to find out if you feel my video is interesting, if the quality is good and general tips of how i could improve future videos to encourage more viewers to my channel.

The video in question is here:

I'm trying to improve my channel as much as possible and i'm taking it seriously now. Spending a lot more time editing my videos to make sure they look good, but you may have suggestions that i haven't thought of or see things wrong with my video that i cant.

 

[ProjectXerxes]

Good video, oretty good commentary. Your ending can't really be heard because the music starts getting too loud. Perhaps increase the volume on your commentary. Also add a bit more excitement when making passes.

I have a thread a couple threads below. Would love to get some feedback. ( My newscast/mortal kombat/and newest craigslist preferably)