How is my commentary?

[AverageEverydayGuy]

How can I improve my commentary? is it good enough or do I need work?

 

[MuterOfMinds]

You commentary is quite good, but you could try and be more energetic and happy throughout your videos! you editing is funny and a bright personality would help your channel allot.

 

[AverageEverydayGuy]

You commentary is quite good, but you could try and be more energetic and happy throughout your videos! you editing is funny and a bright personality would help your channel allot.

Thanks man, sorry for not replying fast, I really do appreciate the feedback though

 

[MuterOfMinds]

Thanks man, sorry for not replying fast, I really do appreciate the feedback though

No worries! Hope this helps to make you channel a better place!