How is My Channel Trailer?

You have the same problem I have, it is hard to read a text and make it sound natural and interesting. Though I think you can do better. Try to put some more feeling and conviction into what you are saying and make it seem less like you are just reading a text of a screen. I would suggest that you play around with it some more, do a couple of dozen or more recordings and give yourself the freedom to do some strange things. I am sure you will be able to put more of yourself in it. As it is now there is a huge gap between your natural reactions to the games in the game fragments and your pretty flat dry style of presenting yourself in the rest of the video.
 
Hey Dave!

I agree with kelkschiz.

I also want to add that you should choose more interesting/funny ( But also show some of your personality) gameplay footage.
 
You should try something more energetic and natural. Your clips show you have personality but the trailer does not. Even if you have to edit it afterwords I would try something off the cuff. Start with why we should watch your videos right away. Good luck!
 
It's a very slow video for a trailer. Add some music and have game clips constantly playing. Average viewer has ADD
 
Personally if that had been my video I would've taken the audio from what you were saying to camera and put that over clips of your gameplay instead of cutting away to them. I liked your use of cards, I've never thought of doing that in my trailer but if gaming channels were my thing I probably would have clicked onto one of your other videos because of those cards.
The video as it stands now was presented a little dry for my taste, more video clips or even some music might've got me more engaged but I think your script covered what needed to be said and the examples you gave let me understand what to expect from your channel.
 
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