How good are my edits?

[evilmuska]

Hello everyone!

I'm just getting started doing some Youtube gaming stuff on the side with some friends and roommates, and I'm trying to get my editing skills honed to try and make the videos as entertaining as possible.

I feel like the best job I've done editing with my videos so far is my Dead Rising 2 montage I did a while back:

I'm mainly looking for feedback on the editing quality/style/timing as well as the post-production stuff like special effects and pop-up text. Because I know the jokes and commentary aren't that spectacular right now, as we are just getting into the groove of doing this.

Be as honest as possible, and don't hold back. I'm here to learn.

 

[Avoxidas]

This was actually really good! Your voice sounded excited the whole time, some of the edits added some humor, and most importantly... DINO MASKS!

 

[evilmuska]

This was actually really good! Your voice sounded excited the whole time, some of the edits added some humor, and most importantly... DINO MASKS!

Thanks! I still need to work on being humorous tho. That was an hour and a half of footage compressed into 10 or so minutes. the rest of the time I either was really unfunny (in my eyes) or not saying much of anything. Is there anything in there you think I could have done better? I mean, really be nitpicky, I know I was when I made the video, lol.

 

[Avoxidas]

Thanks! I still need to work on being humorous tho. That was an hour and a half of footage compressed into 10 or so minutes. the rest of the time I either was really unfunny (in my eyes) or not saying much of anything. Is there anything in there you think I could have done better? I mean, really be nitpicky, I know I was when I made the video, lol.

You don't HAVE to be funny, just be yourself! You'll find yourself enjoying it more, and it will seem more authentic. Unless you a REALLY funny guy, in which case, we could be good friends! XD Keep up the good work man!