Loved the video man! Great edits, shows promise!
A few things I could add to it if someone else already put this on here then whoopsie.
When you are talking about sonic and not showing gameplay you are using the same song over and over again. It makes the whole video slow down.
Although the way you said everything was nice and thought out a big issue is what I said above.
At some points your motions are a bit choppy BUT THEY ARE BETTER THAN MINE SO I GUESS I CAN'T REALLY SAY MUCH ON THAT.
all in all it was a great video! Work on making your voice coherent (I know the pain man, i'm from Russia myself) and work on adding more music to make the video flow better and I could see it getting big!
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